Winds

nature’s breath roams free a dance of unseen force a carrier of scents By Zyrool

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/30/2025 2:09:00 PM

Yes, a carrier of scents. So many of those scents are undistinguishable to humans, only dogs and other animals can smell them and know what they are. I have a dog who has a very sensitive nose to scents and will take off after something I can't even smell. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/30/2025 3:18:00 PM

Thank you for the read and for sharing this information, Sara. I didn’t know that about the animals. Have a great day, my poet friend.

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 7/30/2025 6:41:00 AM

Very beautiful description of the life giving zephyr.... You know in our Sanatan Dharma(known to the world as Hinduism, although it is not correct to call so), we worship all the aspects of nature. Wind is also a 'devta' (demo God) for us, called as 'Pawan'.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/30/2025 6:48:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words and your enlightenment. I have learnt something new today. Stay blessed, fellow poet.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/29/2025 1:09:00 PM

this is lovely, zyrool!

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/29/2025 3:23:00 PM

Thank you for the read and your support Ilene. Means a lot. Wishing you a wonderful day, my poet friend.

Anne Winter

Date: 7/29/2025 2:43:00 AM

How beautiful wind is, isn't it! To describe it as nature's breath is the most perfect thing ever! Beautifully penned!

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/29/2025 2:50:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely words, Anne. They have lifted my spirits. Have a wonderful day and Stay Blessed my friend.