Nette Onclaud Poet Dramatic Verse

Window of Summer

Nights grow longer, 
stars in flamed blue, 
the luscious trees waving away- 
with boughs so plump,
ripeness is due, 
and dreamy strolls light up the bay...
How the breeze jiggles, toes are bare 
on sandy coasts, ioys are night's grace
 then 'round I go to our town's fair 
and cherish all of summer's blaze!




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Jamie Pan's Contest   2/23/2017
Theme 6: Reflections on a window

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Funom Makama March 6, 2017 at 10:39 AM This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.

Lyva Marty February 26, 2017 at 10:27 PM What we see outside the window reflects memories that still awaken us. Lovely, deep thoughts! Congratulations and thank you for my place in your contest.

Sushma A. Singh February 26, 2017 at 9:58 PM Superb n brilliantly crafted! Deep reflections!! Congrats!!

Lynn Marie February 26, 2017 at 12:59 PM wow..a stunning poetic journey through many inspired thoughts that create a beautiful vignette. An exquisite poem, wonderfully composed, truly a great pleasure to read, a fave. blessings, lynn

Kelly Deschler February 23, 2017 at 1:25 PM So many images are saved in our minds over the years that they become forgotten, until something triggers a memory... I love those moments and your poem brings a few to mind for me... Such a wonderful, nostalgic write. Beautifully done, Nette!

Darren White February 23, 2017 at 2:11 AM You often blow me away with your train of thoughts, the way your fantasy works. Such wonderful poetry it creates, like now.... Good luck in the contest

Winged Warrior February 22, 2017 at 9:12 PM Just, awesome! OK...I'll give first place right now!...put everyone else out of their misery lol...^WW^

Charlie Smith February 22, 2017 at 8:22 PM A wonderful journey you led me on...

Daniel Turner February 22, 2017 at 8:10 PM I could read poetry like this all day, nette. Simply beautiful:)

Chris Green February 22, 2017 at 12:31 PM What can I say, this was amazing. Nette, your work always takes me somewhere beautiful, a gathering of thoughts and ideas and memories, just out there, where I can see them as they fade from view, the never forgotten. This was enchanting and mesmerizing.