Window Neighbours

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1. We are upstairs, rolling on a derailleur
much fun is timely prepared by fate’s chauffeur
rooms facing each other is the plasticine
the models of our contact is the icing
from her own end, she chooses my Tuxedo
and from mine, I scale her feminine ego
our adventure begins to build a factory
ladders and ropes have added to the story
showing guts as durable as the bamboo
pock nosing dogs bark but our indifference boo
carefully playing with the tarantula
as fun’s dissected with a long spatula
two very curious sitting minds now recline
any huge step further and their hearts decline.

Chorus
Window neighbours we are
nothing has stayed sweater
she’s in the east, I’m in the west
the connection is beautiful but also neat
please neighbour, let the windows never stay closed.

2. Sneaking sights of each other, we had no qualms
seeing her dress was a mistake, so no more calm?
her twist puts me in total obscurity
acting as if in need of security
why can’t we cool off this tension’s libido?
I will strip when we are both by the window
such a simple joke has brought back our lost spa
time for bed, but time for us to be at par
window contact using more than just the eye
but night time has never been as nice as pie
all the sneaking boys will not make me appalled
it’s that time of her life so she shln’t be stalled
light through the close frame shows there’s activity
every episode hugs my curiosity.

Chorus
Window neighbours we are
nothing has stayed sweater
she’s in the east, I’m in the west
the connection is beautiful but also neat
please neighbour, let the windows never stay closed.

3. Opposite windows, now a door and a fuse
whatever is seen and talked is put to use
my manipulation of girls, her template
her good choice of fashion, teaches how to date
just windows, but enough for any sharp eyed
clear competitions with no reasons to lie
her hygiene and orderliness are premium
I keep up beyond the perceived minimum
lives so parallel and far from the pigeon
those downstairs are constantly drugged by our gin
this sweet companionship is clear and straight edged
free, lose, wonderful and without any pledge
even though our hormones have been quite stable
the great feeling makes us inseparable.

Chorus
Window neighbours we are
nothing has stayed sweater
she’s in the east, I’m in the west
the connection is beautiful but also neat
please neighbour, let the windows never stay closed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/6/2017 12:17:00 PM
"Brilliant" Funom as your name suggests you put a bit of fun yet with purpose into this one with a "Brilliant" imagery to go with it - Indiana . . . ; )
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/30/2018 10:29:00 AM
Thank you very much Indiana
Date: 8/1/2017 4:44:00 PM
These lyrics are extremely creative, to say the least, Funom!! I have no doubt that deep down you have a fine sense of humour. I hope bad weather won't spoil the fun! Regards // paul
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Date: 1/30/2018 10:29:00 AM
hahahahahaha... Bad weather can't spoil the fun.. Thank you so much Callus
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