Window

WINDOW

window to the soul
may not be done with mirror
choose some quiet place
eyes closed    body relaxed
you looking at you    just light

introspectionterza rima

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/28/2011 9:32:00 PM

I think it's called reflection. Nice verse to think about.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/25/2011 11:12:00 AM

This is such a soothing read, Dave- I think I need to do this-- thank you for the reminder here and also thank you for dropping by my poems :) you are sweet to do so :) and yes I believe in angels too-- I had such a vivid dream from before I am almost sure it was real... hugs and enjoy your weekend :D

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/23/2011 6:22:00 PM

Yes... It takes the insight to see oneself......clearly enough to recognize the image we thought we knew.

James Peranteau

Date: 6/20/2011 6:10:00 AM

A great piece to focus on when meditating sir ! Awesome job dear poet ! Have a spectacular week my friend ! Much love, james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/19/2011 10:57:00 AM

Profound, Daver. We see only our bodies in the mirror. Only through introspection do we see the person inside. Awesome poem! Love you, Carolyn

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/19/2011 6:29:00 AM

This is a beauty, Daver! Oh, I'm so finding it difficult to find that "quiet place". Every time I think I've found it, something comes along and rattles the window. Strange, it had always been open before. A most inspirational man, are you! Happy Father's Day, to a wise and influential man! Best to you and yours!! Love, Mikki

Daver Austin
Date: 6/20/2011 10:57:00 AM

Do the above and use a mantra - OHM, sung softly over and over works like a charm. I use HU. Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/19/2011 5:16:00 AM

Inspiration has filled the pages of poetry over this weekend here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to have been able to read your poetry here today Daver. Have a wonderful Sunday I will be back soon to read more. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 6/19/2011 2:07:00 AM

Beuatiful, Dave. I haven't been writing much poetry lately - back to writing my novel 'A Journey of Roses and Thorns'. Just dropping in to say hello to you my dear friend. Love, Lainie