I Am Anaya Poet Monoku

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Window

Swooshing sound
                         awakens me
                             I look east
                                         the morning star is present
      

 
17 Syllables
Morning Monoku
Written 5/30/22

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FJ Thomas June 26, 2022 at 12:50 PM I always enjoy reading a poem where the writer has the ability to capture an entire scene with so few words. Beautiful Anaya I Am Anaya June 27, 2022 at 8:21 AM I am always inspired by a beautiful oceanscape. Thank you Kindly, FJ

Komal Walimbe June 4, 2022 at 3:44 AM That's so marvelous and beautiful! Have a great morning always!:) I Am Anaya June 4, 2022 at 10:13 AM Thank you kindly, young poetess ...A dream window, always uplifting. Have a great day Komal!

Valsa George May 31, 2022 at 8:11 PM This is indeed beautiful .....! I like it much I Am Anaya June 4, 2022 at 10:27 AM Nothing like your brilliant dynamic flights of fancy Valsa, you are an insightful power poetess. I am your fan!

Robert Gorelick May 31, 2022 at 3:07 PM You caught that awaking moment with absorbing vibrato. Good luck! I Am Anaya May 31, 2022 at 3:14 PM Thank you, Robert. Ha, I didn't get in the contest, it was too late!