Windmill

It was once the pride of a prairie farmer not too many years ago.
Now, long abandoned it stands forlorn on a wind-blown plateau.
Its rusting blades slowly turn at the whim of every passing breeze.
It has weathered the storms of summer and the bitter winter's freeze!

It leans a bit askew and a couple of blades are missing from the shaft,
And it squeals a lot as it laboriously turns with each passing draught.
The rusty weather vane dangles lifelessly having served its vital role.
No life-sustaining water doth it draw for this once busy watering hole!

A couple of stately cedar trees grow nearby as if standing guard,
Over the old windmill's enfeebled frame so twisted and so marred.
The water tank that once over-flowed with cool waters from the well,
Now lies in a corroding heap where not a living thing doth dwell!

A once sturdy barn leans in upon itself nearby in a terrible shambles,
Nearly hidden by ancient oaks and creeping blackberry brambles.
What was once a prosperous farm, alas, is now torn asunder.
Who once dwelt in that archaic homestead, I am left to wonder!

The once beckoning oasis sated the thirst of a multitude of creatures.
A well-worn path is seen leading there - 'tis one of its lasting features.
The verdant prairies for many years with working windmills were replete.
Graceful windmills that graced the landscape are, alas, nearly obsolete!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/16/2011 12:11:00 AM
Dear Robert, this wonderful poem took me right back to our families homestead in Nekoma, Kansas. You described the old run down homestead and wind mill perfectly. It was sad to see when I visited a few years ago. I loved your poem so much I read it to my daughter and her husband and I want to make a copy to send to my second cousin who lives near the homestead if it is okay with you? What a treat. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 9/4/2011 10:50:00 PM
Just everything in your verse makes me feel the effort of those poor old arms turning. This has a feeling of neglect and echoes of some time ago. Another great on Bob
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Date: 9/4/2011 9:34:00 PM
have you heard from CL Thornton? I think he is in the path of that hurricane Irene and he hasn't answered my notes.
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Date: 9/4/2011 8:38:00 PM
so is my record player... ain't it strange, ain't it strange... thanks, bob! namaste~n
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Date: 9/4/2011 5:35:00 PM
sad picture mate of what has been, the future came now obscene, some bugger may take it in hand, returning past which was so grand:( great descriptive of the way is is poem, you don't miss the facts mate, im off to mommas soon, on ya cobber, mine!
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Date: 9/4/2011 4:28:00 PM
Awesome write, Bob. I remember the beautiful windmills when we visited Holland and I can imagine your old windmill once being like the ones we saw there. I always enjoy your poetry, my friend
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Date: 9/4/2011 4:18:00 PM
Dear Bob, thank you for sharing this inspiring poem with me. The windmill is much like our journey through life. We may not always be what we once were, but hopefully we leave behind something that inspires others. You are always an inspiration to me, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/3/2011 7:42:00 PM
some still remain in some States Bob and just read a poem of like by Jack Horne earlier on Windmills... awesome as always.. and oh Curtis is a pleasure to read and so grateful all the time ..no wonder u two stand out so well luv.. my new contest is posted..so have fun on this holiday weekend...
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Date: 9/3/2011 6:05:00 PM
Wow Robert, this is a perfect windmill poem! It all came together so flawlessly!! Thanks for sharing it with us!!
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