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Winding Queue

Siezed
It seems
Don't lout, next
Juncture might be
You

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Andrea Dietrich

November 21, 2016 at 4:44 PM

I liked this one, Samiha. The idea of a winding queue. WE don't use that word in America and before I came here I did not know it meant line!

Paul Callus

November 9, 2016 at 3:22 PM

Hi Samiha! You came to mind today, so stopped by to see what you've been posting. This is an interesting form which I have tried a few times. You won't see me at the 'next juncture'...I dislike queues, and do my best to avoid them! Best regards // paul

Samiha Zubair

November 12, 2016 at 3:22 PM

Who doesn't, but the contemplation dawns when our breaths are already numbered. Hugs and kisses. Keep in touch.