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Winding Queue

Siezed It seems Don't lout, next Juncture might be You

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Date: 11/21/2016 4:44:00 PM
I liked this one, Samiha. The idea of a winding queue. WE don't use that word in America and before I came here I did not know it meant line!
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Date: 11/9/2016 3:22:00 PM
Hi Samiha! You came to mind today, so stopped by to see what you've been posting. This is an interesting form which I have tried a few times. You won't see me at the 'next juncture'...I dislike queues, and do my best to avoid them! Best regards // paul
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/12/2016 3:22:00 PM
Who doesn't, but the contemplation dawns when our breaths are already numbered. Hugs and kisses. Keep in touch.
Date: 10/11/2016 7:04:00 AM
Very nice ..
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 10/11/2016 7:08:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 10/10/2016 5:09:00 PM
Short and nicely expressed. This is quite deep for merely a few words. A fantastic poetic warning
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 10/10/2016 5:18:00 PM
Thanks, the genesis will always sing the anthem of demise or else its importance will be lost. Thanks again.

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