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The vortex dropped as it crossed the lake and lifted the water in its wake. Stunned, we ran into the hall and waited for the roof to fall. How odd it was, we heard no sound, as giant oaks crashed to the ground, We heard no sound of breaking glass, in merely seconds, it had passed. In shock and awe, we crept outside, and viewed the twister's homicide, great trees were broken, snapped like sticks, so much damage, done so quick. The adjuster came and viewed the wreck, and then he started writing checks. He gave us more for our old car than we had even bought it for. He gave us money for junk in the yard, that we had been ready to discard. We fixed the roof, paid the yard guys, and had money left over to our surprise. We got a new car, the most beautiful 'Vette, and managed to pay off some of our debt. Our car note is less than the old one was, this tragedy was a gift from above. Both figuratively and literally, it was a windfall and we can only stand enthralled, So it's true all clouds have a silver lining, and God's love is true, in darkness shining. ©Danielle White

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Date: 2/10/2009 2:57:00 AM
loved reading this piece, your words surely brought in the images... ~ Arany
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Date: 2/8/2009 1:28:00 PM
great story wrapped up around poetry. enjoyed reading it and have a pleasant day.
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Date: 2/8/2009 1:18:00 PM
The tragedy itself isn't good but the outcome sure is, that's marvelous, now if only that could happen like that for mose. Excellent flow and rhyme to this. Michael
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Date: 2/8/2009 12:00:00 PM
so much damage, done so quick. (, will help the meter) I think (just me) If you fixed on a meter per line this always very good verse would be even better! Light & Love Debbie
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