Winded Breaths

this wheat
quivers
like flesh
beneath
the whispers 
of love’s lips 
softly tracing
tongued secrets 
around the edges

I tremble 
the same 
within 
these thoughts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Proxenos Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 8:52 AM
A very passionate sensual write dear Sandra - 'The whispers of love's lips softly tracing tongued secrets around the edges - wow Sandra! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Adams Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 9:58 AM
Thank you so much Jennifer...i love looking at nature and creating images.... hugs
Mcintosh Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 6:45 AM
Beautiful. God bless you sweet lady, Love, Gina
Adams Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 9:57 AM
Thank you Gina... hugs
Na Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 7:31 PM
This looks like another nature scribble I think you called it. Very interesting I must say. I do the same when I`m out in the open with nature. I can just look at something and try and create whats there. I really enjoy animals in nature. Thanks again for sharing. Keep up the scribbles my dear
Adams Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 8:07 PM
yes i call short little writes like this my scribbles, i often sit at a park with my empty bus between schools....i always watch nature and see what my mind conjures up from the scenes, there's beauty in it if one chooses to look for it...
Thompson Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 5:03 PM
I'm definitely hot under the collar. Nicely penned. Best wishes..Ron :)
Adams Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 6:29 PM
Thank you so much Ron :)
One Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 3:59 PM
deep thoughts my friend...
Adams Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 6:29 PM
thank you....my muse has been digging deep in all aspects of life... sigh
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 3:26 PM
You bring the audience along for the ride.
Adams Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 3:54 PM
Thank you. I try to show what I see in my little nature scribbles ;)
Green Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 2:18 PM
I may never look at wheat the same again. This beautifully sensual poem has me quivering. Simply enchanting my friend. ~Sigh~
Adams Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 6:31 PM
Thank you so much my friend... i love looking at nature and creating a vision... hugs
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