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Winded Breaths

this wheat
quivers
like flesh
beneath
the whispers 
of love’s lips 
softly tracing
tongued secrets 
around the edges

I tremble 
the same 
within 
these thoughts

windfree verse

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/20/2019 8:52:00 AM

A very passionate sensual write dear Sandra - 'The whispers of love's lips softly tracing tongued secrets around the edges - wow Sandra! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2019 9:58:00 AM

Thank you so much Jennifer...i love looking at nature and creating images.... hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/20/2019 6:45:00 AM

Beautiful. God bless you sweet lady, Love, Gina

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2019 9:57:00 AM

Thank you Gina... hugs

Na Na

Date: 11/19/2019 7:31:00 PM

This looks like another nature scribble I think you called it. Very interesting I must say. I do the same when I`m out in the open with nature. I can just look at something and try and create whats there. I really enjoy animals in nature. Thanks again for sharing. Keep up the scribbles my dear

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/19/2019 8:07:00 PM

yes i call short little writes like this my scribbles, i often sit at a park with my empty bus between schools....i always watch nature and see what my mind conjures up from the scenes, there's beauty in it if one chooses to look for it...