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Wind Whispers of Love

"If you listen to the wind very carefully, you'll be able to hear me whisper my love for you." - Andrew Davidson I write upon the wind my whispers of sweet love hoping it will let you feel I'm nearer They travel o'er seas and oceans and reach you right on time You send them floating back to me in the cool breeze which kisses my cheeks and makes me blush red I hold them close to my heart as I go to bed and dream of us as one where time does freeze Joy fills my heart in love sublime no check on emotions You will be my forever love and stay dearer you're my Godsent miracle from above Soon, we'll make mem'ries, save them in our treasure trove our love will grow and grow crystal clearer Once joined with our unique notions we will strive to make rhyme This glowing hope of our future, my heart does seize and makes me rewrite those secrets we pled 02.01.2021
For Constance la France's "My invented form - I write upon" contest

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Date: 2/16/2021 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" Love your line, "you're my Godsent miracle from above." Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 2/15/2021 10:21:00 AM
Hi Jo, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/15/2021 9:20:00 AM
Jo, congratulations on your win in my contest, I Write Upon, using my Invented Form, your poem is wonderful _Constance
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Date: 2/4/2021 1:08:00 PM
very creative, to write upon the wind. LOVELY!
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Date: 2/2/2021 11:50:00 AM
Sweet love returned on the breeze, Wonderful write Jo..
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Date: 2/1/2021 6:14:00 AM
You wrote beautifully upon the wind. A touching verse filled with emotions. Hope you win BIG, Jo.
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Date: 1/31/2021 10:57:00 PM
So romantic in writing this difficult form. You did well. Best for a win. ~~
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Date: 1/31/2021 9:06:00 PM
Great flow in such a tough form (I find it hard). So romantic especially liked first paragraph. All the best for contest. Take care Rama
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