Wind Whispers

Near the cliff's edge he stood
poised and composed. Wind swept dust
whirling salt mingling thyme,
tickling his half-clogged nose.
 
Seagulls screeching,
gliding, soaring, diving,
harbingers of electric storms.
 
A mistral wind blew cold and cruel
black clouds formed low, forbidding.
Lazy lizards scuttled for refuge 
Sparrows hid in lowly carobs
Or flew into the stately pines.
 
The wind spoke suddenly.
Gusts whispering dread.
An urge, a whisper, an invitation
echoing sirens of old:
"Be free, fly, liberate yourself."
 
Below, the sea in turmoil,
no fishing boats in sight.
No one but he dared face the storm,
the storm he feared 
was inside his tattered soul,
a sea of torment.
 
The birds and creatures of the wild
found a haven, but he had none,
no solutions to the inner storm,
except to dive and join the sirens,
in the perilous seas below.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Volumes Avatar
April 9, 2023 at 3:00 AM
So descriptive Victor, and the call of the sea to join the sirens.. What a beautifully sad and carried out by such a desperate person. poem. Suicide in always so dramatic, and so sad for those left behind. Well written Victor.
Milgate Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 9:06 PM
So glad I found this well written poem and can feel that you are very aware in a poetic form of living near such an alive body of water, its cliffs, currents and dangers as we ponder the difficulties of life. Took me awhile to write this-- the poem was so striking.
Allison Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 2:42 AM
Such a deep poem in many ways Victor, We face such traumatic turbulent times in our lives my friend, thinking of you, hugs Jan xx
Daniel Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 11:33 PM
Such a beautiful poem of turbulence, Victor, you are a master at this:)
Crabtree Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 2:46 PM
Another poem perfectly penned, Victor... ~Angie
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 5:46 PM
wow, I love when you write this way. Free verse is your forte and this one on inner turmoil contrasting with wind blows me awayyyyy
Krutsinger Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 3:59 AM
The storms we face are often in our hearts. Nice job.
Horsman Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 8:32 AM
Wonderful deep poetry, love this, Victor.
Y. Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 6:57 AM
Hi Victor, Your poem is so heartbreaking. Nevertheless the images in this piece were so vivid and clear. I hope you are you are well my friend. Have a nice day- Alexis
Andresen Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 6:45 AM
- Oh, heartbreakingly beautifully written, Victor - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 1:16 AM
A sad verse Victor, many see no other way sometimes and think that suicide is the answer. Tom
Buehler Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 9:20 PM
This sad poem is written with your usual eloquence and fine imagery, Victor. It's wonderful to know that Jesus is still calming storms. Blessings.
Roper Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 8:39 PM
Sad , but great verse, Victor. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
Crabtree Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 3:45 PM
This poem leaves a lot to ponder. I hope you are okay, Victor. Keep writing my dear friend. Your poetry and comments are an inspiration to me and others. :) ~Angie
Onclaud Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 3:12 PM
such a haunting story which nearly tears me up, victor...beautifully expressed...please take care...huggs
Kendrick Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 9:58 AM
Emotive and expressive work. Creative way to present the topic. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Sara
Hamilton Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 7:45 AM
This is storytelling at it's best well done Victor!
One Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 7:03 AM
This is a deep and sad poem, where one has practically given up.. I hope you are ok, I see you have started oral chemo, its a horrid thing and I wish you all the best..
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 5:30 AM
A fave for me! God can even calm the seas within us. My dear Mom starts chemo today. I pray peace for her.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 5:54 PM
God be with you, Victor! May God give you peace and healing.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 6:50 AM
I too have started oral chemo yesterday. ~~
Pandit Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 4:37 AM
Exquisite details paint his surroundings in this emotive write--and he speaks--quite sad and melancholy. Excellent, as always, Victor.
Kitchin Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 3:02 AM
A well done dark emotive poem Victor, I hope he didn't jump. hugs
Ball Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 3:00 AM
WoW! What a sad poem. You actually leave us with a choice here for the ending. It could end with him diving off the cliff or he could turn and head back to a warm lighthouse where he could have a warm but solitary meal prepared and waiting. He had a decision to make. eat the meal he had prepared and left sitting on the table or end it all. However there is eternity to think about. great job here written with superb imagery as always. God Bless, JB
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