Wind Whispers

Near the cliff's edge he stood
poised and composed. Wind swept dust
whirling salt mingling thyme,
tickling his half-clogged nose.
 
Seagulls screeching,
gliding, soaring, diving,
harbingers of electric storms.
 
A mistral wind blew cold and cruel
black clouds formed low, forbidding.
Lazy lizards scuttled for refuge 
Sparrows hid in lowly carobs
Or flew into the stately pines.
 
The wind spoke suddenly.
Gusts whispering dread.
An urge, a whisper, an invitation
echoing sirens of old:
"Be free, fly, liberate yourself."
 
Below, the sea in turmoil,
no fishing boats in sight.
No one but he dared face the storm,
the storm he feared 
was inside his tattered soul,
a sea of torment.
 
The birds and creatures of the wild
found a haven, but he had none,
no solutions to the inner storm,
except to dive and join the sirens,
in the perilous seas below.

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Date: 4/9/2023 3:00:00 AM
So descriptive Victor, and the call of the sea to join the sirens.. What a beautifully sad and carried out by such a desperate person. poem. Suicide in always so dramatic, and so sad for those left behind. Well written Victor.
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Date: 10/19/2020 9:06:00 PM
So glad I found this well written poem and can feel that you are very aware in a poetic form of living near such an alive body of water, its cliffs, currents and dangers as we ponder the difficulties of life. Took me awhile to write this-- the poem was so striking.
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Date: 10/17/2020 2:42:00 AM
Such a deep poem in many ways Victor, We face such traumatic turbulent times in our lives my friend, thinking of you, hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/16/2020 11:33:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem of turbulence, Victor, you are a master at this:)
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Date: 10/16/2020 2:46:00 PM
Another poem perfectly penned, Victor... ~Angie
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Date: 10/15/2020 5:46:00 PM
wow, I love when you write this way. Free verse is your forte and this one on inner turmoil contrasting with wind blows me awayyyyy
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Date: 10/15/2020 3:59:00 AM
The storms we face are often in our hearts. Nice job.
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Date: 10/14/2020 8:32:00 AM
Wonderful deep poetry, love this, Victor.
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Date: 10/14/2020 6:57:00 AM
Hi Victor, Your poem is so heartbreaking. Nevertheless the images in this piece were so vivid and clear. I hope you are you are well my friend. Have a nice day- Alexis
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Date: 10/14/2020 6:45:00 AM
- Oh, heartbreakingly beautifully written, Victor - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/14/2020 1:16:00 AM
A sad verse Victor, many see no other way sometimes and think that suicide is the answer. Tom
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Date: 10/13/2020 9:20:00 PM
This sad poem is written with your usual eloquence and fine imagery, Victor. It's wonderful to know that Jesus is still calming storms. Blessings.
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Date: 10/13/2020 8:39:00 PM
Sad , but great verse, Victor. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/13/2020 3:45:00 PM
This poem leaves a lot to ponder. I hope you are okay, Victor. Keep writing my dear friend. Your poetry and comments are an inspiration to me and others. :) ~Angie
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Date: 10/13/2020 3:12:00 PM
such a haunting story which nearly tears me up, victor...beautifully expressed...please take care...huggs
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Date: 10/13/2020 9:58:00 AM
Emotive and expressive work. Creative way to present the topic. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Sara
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Date: 10/13/2020 7:45:00 AM
This is storytelling at it's best well done Victor!
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Date: 10/13/2020 7:03:00 AM
This is a deep and sad poem, where one has practically given up.. I hope you are ok, I see you have started oral chemo, its a horrid thing and I wish you all the best..
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Date: 10/13/2020 5:30:00 AM
A fave for me! God can even calm the seas within us. My dear Mom starts chemo today. I pray peace for her.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2020 5:54:00 PM
God be with you, Victor! May God give you peace and healing.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 10/13/2020 6:50:00 AM
I too have started oral chemo yesterday. ~~
Date: 10/13/2020 4:37:00 AM
Exquisite details paint his surroundings in this emotive write--and he speaks--quite sad and melancholy. Excellent, as always, Victor.
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Date: 10/13/2020 3:02:00 AM
A well done dark emotive poem Victor, I hope he didn't jump. hugs
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Date: 10/13/2020 3:00:00 AM
WoW! What a sad poem. You actually leave us with a choice here for the ending. It could end with him diving off the cliff or he could turn and head back to a warm lighthouse where he could have a warm but solitary meal prepared and waiting. He had a decision to make. eat the meal he had prepared and left sitting on the table or end it all. However there is eternity to think about. great job here written with superb imagery as always. God Bless, JB
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