Wind Through the Palm Trees

Wind through the palm trees....

                   Sounds as if water flowing

                                              minds eye oasis
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 8:36 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, Paula
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December 17, 2010 at 8:10 AM
An "oasis" emerges so beautifully through your words, Paula. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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December 17, 2010 at 7:31 AM
Congrats Paula on your big win in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water my friend.. enjoy today with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 10:04 PM
Congratulations, Paula, on your win with this imaginative haiku!
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December 14, 2010 at 4:13 PM
So desciptive that I can see the scene in my Mind's Eye..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
Mehta Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 7:42 AM
Nice metaphor of water flowing, Paula
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December 13, 2010 at 12:11 AM
Paula. I love how you compared win to water. That is very original. Thanks again for the super win you gave me. I appreciate it very much. LUv, Andrea
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