Wind Through the Palm Trees

Wind through the palm trees.... Sounds as if water flowing minds eye oasis

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/17/2010 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, Paula

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/17/2010 8:10:00 AM

An "oasis" emerges so beautifully through your words, Paula. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/17/2010 7:31:00 AM

Congrats Paula on your big win in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water my friend.. enjoy today with luv..

Rick Parise

Date: 12/16/2010 10:11:00 PM

CONGRATS to you~NICE~ENJOYED~God Bless You ~Rick

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2010 10:04:00 PM

Congratulations, Paula, on your win with this imaginative haiku!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/14/2010 4:13:00 PM

So desciptive that I can see the scene in my Mind's Eye..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/13/2010 7:42:00 AM

Nice metaphor of water flowing, Paula

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2010 12:11:00 AM

Paula. I love how you compared win to water. That is very original. Thanks again for the super win you gave me. I appreciate it very much. LUv, Andrea