Wind Swept Mountains

Scalding winds, cold as ice, burn away frozen layers. Drawing raw, unbidden scars, upon the rugged spires.
For the contest, Show Me Sponsored by Brian Strand
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Devnath  Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 2:01 PM
Congrats on your superb win. Loved it. bl
Neels Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 10:47 AM
Stunning imagery with a few line Paula, congratulations on your win :) love Wilma
Falotico Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 6:10 AM
Congrats on your win!! always Michael
Brown Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 5:30 AM
Congratulations on the win in Brian's "Show Me" contest Paula. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 10:44 PM
A great picture painted in a few words. Congratulations Paula
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 9:42 PM
wow, it's short but very powerful in its imagery. COOL congrats, Paula.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 6:51 PM
CONGRATS PAULA ON FIRST PLACE WIN .. AN AWESOME ENTRY MY FRIEND.. HOW U BEEN?
Johnson Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 6:13 PM
Starkly fierce. Congratulations Paula. Love, Joyce
Kendrick Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 5:19 PM
Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading into the depths of your thoughts..Sara
Brown Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 11:06 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this afternoon Paula and wish you the best in the contest. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love, Carol
Sivey Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 8:46 PM
Very awesome great natural visualization poem! You said a ton in such a short amount of space! I love your descriptions of what wind will do, very imaginable by your words! Awesome Work!!
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