Wind Storm

the torrential rain fall 
the cataclysmic wind
seeks and destroy
everything in it's path
has been ravaged 
by the storm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Degenhardt Avatar
October 23, 2008 at 9:34 AM
A lot of details and the words flow naturally and smoothly making for a zvery good read. Michael
Kilby Avatar
October 23, 2008 at 8:35 AM
a picture that is vividly painted ;P
Fawcett Avatar
October 20, 2008 at 3:39 PM
Lovely write Deneen. Nature, that most precious of all beauties, can be so unforgiving when she unleashes the fullness of her power. Am I right in thinking that we write almost as much about lost love as we do about love, yet we write very little about the darker side of nature than we do about its beauty? Love, Nigel
Foulk Avatar
October 20, 2008 at 3:21 PM
yes such a tragic thing to happen. you wrote this in vivid detail.
Lakhera Avatar
October 20, 2008 at 5:49 AM
Ahhh so terrible! Now this reminds me of Tsunami. Yes everything was destroyed. The loss can't ever be overcome. Sometimes nature's so unwilling and so are the humans. Honest one! Love, Chitra
Winter Avatar
October 20, 2008 at 5:40 AM
The poor souls affected by mother nature's fury. My heart goes out to anyone caught in her path of destruction. Truthful and scary write. Love, Shar
Foster Avatar
October 19, 2008 at 9:05 PM
The visuals of this write are quite vivid indeed, I kept watch on Ike as he went on a seek and destroy mission in Texas... He blew a hole in top of my brothers roof... I am thankful that all were safe... Thank you for sharing the read my friend. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
Higgins Avatar
October 19, 2008 at 4:57 PM
The wind of a storm or the wind in our life can all be so destructive. Nice picture painted.
W Avatar
October 19, 2008 at 1:54 PM
So true, as im a true Floridian that came by way of hurricanes. I can only look back now and thank for what i have to look forward too. Lena
Torres Avatar
October 19, 2008 at 12:59 PM
Start praying thats all you have left. Great write so true. Michael
Sheart Avatar
October 19, 2008 at 11:07 AM
Hi Sweet Sure gets me to thinking about all who have been affected by the huricanes etc. Heartwrenching and very profound. Excellent! Take care, Love Light Truth Patricia
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