Wind Rider Collaboration

**From my collection of poems:  'Apollo's Diary' 

I wonder if she thinks of me,
   at night, alone.....
   in her melting-bed;
With moon full as her curiousity
   ....my breath, the wind in the late hour
   the stars I shall tease with,
   and phallic-lavender to ignite her bosom;
I am all things gentle, yet mighty,
   soft as her silk sheets.....
Dark and tall in her bedroom shadows,
   but candle-light makes me real
   with the night so young,
   if a king should come ----
   he will not do.....
She longs love, not adulterous power;
   I shall whisper upon a balmy breeze.....
(I wonder if she thinks of me)
    at night.....

By: Keith O.J. Hunt 

In Response, 

Thoughts of him enshroud me, 
       at night,  alone… .
       in my lonely bed; 
With the moon sharing her luminosity 
     …I breathe his memory, in the late hour 
     the stars do more than just align 
      they collide into each other and orbit 
He is all things to me, he is that loving song 
       that never leaves my mind 
Should he arrive at my doorstep, I’d open 
      the sails of my heart for him 
I’d be a whisper for his soul, a balmy breeze….
      his night…        

By Mystic Rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Anish Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 3:09 PM
What a great romantic collaboration! You have a great rapport going on here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 8:27 AM
You have a unique style that can't be topped Keith, and it flows well as evidenced by Vie's inspired connection with it.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 1:52 PM
Thanks Connie, very sweet of you to say! I don't know if I believe my style can't be topped, but it's reward enough to bring a little more light into the world! Keith:-)
A  Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 1:51 AM
now that is stunning. SKAT
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 1:48 PM
Thanks SKAT, enjoy your weekend honey! Keith;-)
Smith Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 8:22 PM
I read this on Vienna's page....so romantic Keith...love it Tim
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 1:44 PM
Many thanks Tim! Enjoy your weekend brother! Keith:-)
Rebstock Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 7:32 PM
Enjoyed poems, seems like a Romeo and Juliet poems, very romantic
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