Wind Rider

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I based my poem on an old Cherokee legend . . .  hope it works.

An old man sits peacefully in deep thought
Missing teeth, milky eyes . . .  leathery skin
Wind Rider his name  – a shaman 

The young man seethes in anger
Strong, excitable . . . limbs in constant motion 
Standing Bear his name  – dangerous and violent 

Smoke curls lightly into the sky
A sacred moment upon the plain
Old to the young – a story

The soft voice rises . . .  catches the wind 
There is a battle that rages within each of us
. . .  two wolfs circle each other

One is evil . . .  it’s spirit is angry filled with
jealousy, sorrow, greed, arrogance, guilt
resentment, inferiority, lies . . .  ego

The other wolf is good --- it’s spirit is filled with
joy, peace love, hope, humility, kindness, empathy
generosity, truth, compassion . . .  faith

Each wolf is strong and howls into the night wind 
Yellow-red eyes flair, deep throated-growls, bared fangs
Breathing hard they attack

Wind Rider lifts his heavy head
Feels the sun . . .     waits

Standing Bear thinking  . . .  finally asks
Who will win?

Wind Rider smiles 
The one you feed



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David Meade
11/28/2014
Live Generously

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/19/2016 12:47:00 PM
David... I love your expansion of this proverb!!! Well done. Thanks for your kind visit! Big Hugggs. Deb
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Date: 5/15/2015 11:13:00 AM
Your words come to us as from a wise sage with the voice of an elder and a heart of a child. You open your heart and ask us in so that your thoughts may warm and inspire us. Emile. #7
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Date: 1/17/2015 3:18:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one again David.
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Date: 1/8/2015 10:19:00 PM
i LOVE it! You are so freakin' awesome :)
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Date: 12/27/2014 3:20:00 PM
I am a fan of this old legend, I like the imagery you have added to the story.
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Date: 12/11/2014 8:05:00 AM
Wonderful poem, David. Ir's a WOW.
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Date: 12/5/2014 1:22:00 AM
Well written, I love the imagery and the way that you pull this poem together.
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Date: 12/4/2014 8:03:00 AM
Fantastic! A creative, poetic take on an old legend.
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Date: 12/3/2014 6:09:00 PM
This native girl loves this poem with a full poetic heart and soul, I give you my friend a seven across the board, great job cheri
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Date: 12/2/2014 1:58:00 PM
Enjoyed the native legend of the wolves in your poem. Nicely done. love phyl
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Date: 12/2/2014 7:28:00 AM
An old Indian legend that I enjoy with a new twist..Great one presented by you in poetic form..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/1/2014 10:38:00 PM
there now. You are added!!!
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Date: 12/1/2014 8:23:00 PM
Love, love, love, love, this story. A Fav.
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Date: 12/1/2014 8:04:00 PM
Really a most excellent write here David!! The build-out of your narrative flowed perfectly. These types of writes are always fun and most interesting to read. And a "7" from me too!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 12/1/2014 4:29:00 PM
really excellent pen david deep beautifully painted pal
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Date: 12/1/2014 1:15:00 PM
;-)....Yes..... so true! Enjoyed this story time. I'm a child at heart. Lovely. ...
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Date: 12/1/2014 7:31:00 AM
thoughtfully written David.. :) love the use of the wind rider.. :)
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Date: 11/30/2014 3:14:00 PM
deep thoughts in this David great pen hugs
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Date: 11/29/2014 8:33:00 PM
Drifting plains as they should be, with the Wolf, as they run with the pack. Intervention is inevitable, why, Alpha, is the ultimate, but, be unknown to many, shall wilt to his bitch........ Me, I'm a Scot's man called 'Standing Tall' this the 'Wind Rider' I like, ..............,,
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Date: 11/29/2014 2:28:00 PM
There is wisdom in your words, David. You use the shaman to project your thoughts; there is strength in both good and evil.....finally the winner takes it all. // paul
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Date: 11/29/2014 1:55:00 PM
This reminds me of a myth of Plato where man is a beast with many heads and the one we feed is the one who dominates the man! Very spiritual and philosophical dear, David. It is not just a poem but a lecture and for that a seven is due!
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Date: 11/29/2014 11:08:00 AM
Absolutely outstanding. I was totally taken in by this and moved. Great work.
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Date: 11/29/2014 10:00:00 AM
Great slogan, "Live Generously" Creative write... strong image! Kudos!
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Date: 11/29/2014 9:17:00 AM
Enjoyed this poem; yes, it is the one we feed. Great write.
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Date: 11/28/2014 10:42:00 PM
wow, what a great ending on this one. I hope he chooses wisely!!!
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