Wind On the Water

Ripples follow
 as wind walks along the waters,
it sings, a somber hum
 riding on the waves
eager to touch the crest
 calling out in whispered rhythms
that endless dance along the earth
 to nature's journey.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcgee Avatar
October 11, 2019 at 12:08 PM
Wonderful imagery called out in this delicious poem of yours.
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 10:37 AM
What superb imagery DM I especially love those first 2 lines:-) hugs Jan xx
Green Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 10:33 AM
This was really nice. I love the flow of this wonderful poem.
Warrior Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 10:19 AM
Lovely said my friend...love your furry avatar lol...^WW^ :o)
Babbit Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 10:33 AM
That's my Fefferneuse, 9 years old.
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