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Wind of Change

crazy breeze of change striking water over life~ pond of mindfulness Written: October 05, 2022 Simply Senryu Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John lawless

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Date: 10/6/2022 2:51:00 PM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Yes, change is on the way for sure and I hope it is for the best. Thanks for sharing this work and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/6/2022 1:12:00 PM
- Yes ... agree ... powerful, Las - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 10/5/2022 8:37:00 PM
Waves of change striking over life.... Great image and a powerful senryu. All the best in the contest, dear Lasaad
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Date: 10/5/2022 2:19:00 PM
Well done with this senryu. Perfect vision.
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Date: 10/5/2022 11:39:00 AM
Great poem! I enjoyed this :)
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