Wind of Change

crazy breeze of change striking water over life~ pond of mindfulness Written: October 05, 2022 Simply Senryu Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John lawless
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Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 2:51 PM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Yes, change is on the way for sure and I hope it is for the best. Thanks for sharing this work and for dropping by my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 1:12 PM
- Yes ... agree ... powerful, Las - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
George Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 8:37 PM
Waves of change striking over life.... Great image and a powerful senryu. All the best in the contest, dear Lasaad
Buhagiar Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 2:19 PM
Well done with this senryu. Perfect vision.
Sands Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 11:39 AM
Great poem! I enjoyed this :)
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