Wind Dance

Earth’s sighs take the lead,
Led by a fresh stream of air;
Ballet of the winds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 8:50 PM
Ballet of the winds. HOw truely beautiful and magical these words are Raul.
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June 3, 2009 at 10:36 AM
Wonderful use of personification for an artistic view. I really like the last line. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
Winter Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 4:20 AM
Yes, I must agree that third line is absolutely wonderful! Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 12:04 AM
Love the image in L3 Raul.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian
Chircop Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 3:33 PM
beautiful haiku-beautiful Ballet of winds--you are a master--charma
Gorelick Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 3:19 PM
Another beautiful write..just spectacular. BG
Fraser Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 3:10 PM
Another superb Haiku Raul, keep them coming>James
Santiago Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 2:45 PM
What a superb haiku you have here, loved it! Rgds, E.
Higgins Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 1:28 PM
Another haiku that is on top of the game...earth's sighs..dude that is amazing.....love that image.
Chamma Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 1:07 PM
That's a great Haiku...I loved the last line awful aloot! hah! Take good care... Always, Farah
Cantu Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 1:06 PM
Uh, nice scene, great stage!!!! Just like mystic, open theatre; thanks for the experience =D
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