Wind Dance

Earth’s sighs take the lead, Led by a fresh stream of air; Ballet of the winds.

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Charlene Bird

Date: 6/3/2009 8:50:00 PM

Ballet of the winds. HOw truely beautiful and magical these words are Raul.

Date: 6/3/2009 10:36:00 AM

Wonderful use of personification for an artistic view. I really like the last line. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/3/2009 4:20:00 AM

Yes, I must agree that third line is absolutely wonderful! Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 6/3/2009 12:04:00 AM

Love the image in L3 Raul.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/2/2009 3:33:00 PM

beautiful haiku-beautiful Ballet of winds--you are a master--charma

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/2/2009 3:19:00 PM

Another beautiful write..just spectacular. BG

James Fraser

Date: 6/2/2009 3:10:00 PM

Another superb Haiku Raul, keep them coming>James

Ernesto P. Santiago

Date: 6/2/2009 2:45:00 PM

What a superb haiku you have here, loved it! Rgds, E.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/2/2009 1:28:00 PM

Another haiku that is on top of the game...earth's sighs..dude that is amazing.....love that image.

Farah Chamma

Date: 6/2/2009 1:07:00 PM

That's a great Haiku...I loved the last line awful aloot! hah! Take good care... Always, Farah

Cesar Cantu

Date: 6/2/2009 1:06:00 PM

Uh, nice scene, great stage!!!! Just like mystic, open theatre; thanks for the experience =D