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Wind and Water

Wind and Water A hurricane’s a frightful force of wind, attacking in its landfall with a fury the mixing bowl of nature’s air and water. Would the storm be such a storm without the water? Swirling wildly in the havoc of the wind, they are together in a marriage of such fury. Intense defensive storms soon quell their fury. When the roar subsides with gentle tidal water and a natural sweet breeze is just plain wind. A hurricane's fury is the work of wind and water. 2/22/19 Marathon Mile 24 Mark Toney Sponsor

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/25/2019 5:09:00 PM

Delightful, Janis. Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/24/2019 4:24:00 PM

very descriptive Janis, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/25/2019 9:41:00 AM

Thanks Jan. Glad to hear from you. Hugs.

Charles Messina

Date: 2/24/2019 4:01:00 PM

Very well done, Janis. So many great poems in this contest and this is one. Congratulations on your win. Charlie

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/25/2019 9:43:00 AM

Charles, this was my first time with this form. I enjoyed researching it and taking on the interesting challenge. I could see how using the three words in different ways poetically was a challenge to the writer. Thanks for the honored placement.

Valerie Staton

Date: 2/23/2019 2:50:00 AM

Nicely penned! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/25/2019 9:44:00 AM

Thanks and blessings Valerie.