Joanna Daniel Poet Rhyme

Wind and Grind - Sg

Just like the pleasant zephyr
blowing cool and calm
turns and churns into a storm,
boisterous gale bomb,

Longsuffering mind
can suffer wrong for that long,
then life’s an irked grind.


06.26.2021



For William Kekaula's "Seguidilla" contest

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Paula Goldsmith July 10, 2021 at 11:36 AM Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Have a blessed day with your win..............

Rama Balasubramanian July 9, 2021 at 10:03 PM Back again with congrats on your win. Knew this would place.

Christuraj Alex July 9, 2021 at 8:42 PM Beautiful creation. Congratulations!

Christuraj Alex July 9, 2021 at 8:41 PM Beautiful creation. Congratulations!

Beata Agustin July 9, 2021 at 8:27 PM Congrats! Thanks for sharing your wisdom... expressed in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.

William Kelii Kekaula July 9, 2021 at 4:55 PM The certainties of an act are that there is always an opposite act waiting to happen. Thank you for the exposé, Jo, and for your participation and honorable placement my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich June 27, 2021 at 1:23 PM great analogy here. Love this, Jo

Kim Rodrigues June 26, 2021 at 5:29 AM Well said, Jo!

Rama Balasubramanian June 26, 2021 at 3:21 AM Excellent take on contest. Loved the way you compared mind and wind. A thought came to mind... When negative thoughts blow like soft breeze it is fine, if they become storm they ruin life.

Tom Cunningham June 26, 2021 at 3:06 AM A gentle breeze can without warning turn into a raging storm. Good luck Jo and enjoy your weekend.. Tom

Victor Buhagiar June 26, 2021 at 2:53 AM Great description of a storm. Best for a win.