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Wind and Grind - Sg

Just like the pleasant zephyr blowing cool and calm turns and churns into a storm, boisterous gale bomb, Longsuffering mind can suffer wrong for that long, then life’s an irked grind. 06.26.2021
For William Kekaula's "Seguidilla" contest

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Date: 7/10/2021 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Have a blessed day with your win..............
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Date: 7/9/2021 10:03:00 PM
Back again with congrats on your win. Knew this would place.
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Date: 7/9/2021 8:42:00 PM
Beautiful creation. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/9/2021 8:41:00 PM
Beautiful creation. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/9/2021 8:27:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your wisdom... expressed in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Date: 7/9/2021 4:55:00 PM
The certainties of an act are that there is always an opposite act waiting to happen. Thank you for the exposé, Jo, and for your participation and honorable placement my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 6/27/2021 1:23:00 PM
great analogy here. Love this, Jo
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Date: 6/26/2021 5:29:00 AM
Well said, Jo!
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Date: 6/26/2021 3:21:00 AM
Excellent take on contest. Loved the way you compared mind and wind. A thought came to mind... When negative thoughts blow like soft breeze it is fine, if they become storm they ruin life.
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Date: 6/26/2021 3:06:00 AM
A gentle breeze can without warning turn into a raging storm. Good luck Jo and enjoy your weekend.. Tom
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Date: 6/26/2021 2:53:00 AM
Great description of a storm. Best for a win.
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