Wind

Elements Part II-Wind Sponsor: Brian Davey Brisk breeze beyond the bluster of the buzzes from bumblebees, great gusts gifted and granted toward the garden full of greaves. Coiling curves within curls created contingent upon the current, tangled and torrential twines taking the sea towards the turrent. High temperatures are hazardous while handling the blowing heat, weaving winds will wander with or without natures wreathe. Abducting air is absent while aligned after its zephyr ablazes, fire forgives fearlessly as the lightening frees the winds uneven frazes. ~This poem is a mix of Alliteration and Couplet~ ~Date Written: March 25, 2016~
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Cheema Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Very lyrical, Laura! Congrats on your placement!
A. Sharma Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 1:11 AM
Wonderful poetry n win Laura.. big congrats!
Poteet Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 10:30 PM
Lovely, Laura. Alliteration at its best. I enjoyed your piece. Congratulations on your placement.
Haight Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 12:45 PM
Nicely done, Laura. Congratulations on your placement in the 'wind' contest. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 12:57 PM
thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Davey Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 5:53 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my Elements: Wind Contest Laura! I also agree with Silent the last two lines were phenomenal
Scars Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 10:12 AM
Thank you very much Brian! :) glad you enjoyed it :)-luloo
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