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the sparrows shiver a hat hangs in the branches …the wind feels nothing John G. Lawless©3/7/2023

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Date: 3/7/2023 7:49:00 PM
Hats off to you, Lawless!
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Date: 3/7/2023 3:11:00 PM
Good Haiku. For sure. Send my hat back please. I wondered where it went? Great third line..”the wind feels nothing” Pangs with Fangs
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Date: 3/7/2023 3:07:00 PM
"the wind cries, Mary" There you go thinking again, John:)
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Date: 3/7/2023 2:49:00 PM
Hello John Lawless,the wind never feels its chilness when blowing cold air. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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