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Wilted Flowers

i paved blooming garden path to walk with you… flowers wilted waiting August 26, 2020 Syllable count : 17 Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : When Plans Dont Go To Plan Sponsor : Silent One

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Date: 8/29/2020 12:36:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning line, Subimal :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2020 11:03:00 AM
So pensive, Sublimal. You tell the story perfectly in your monoku! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/29/2020 10:41:00 AM
Great imagery in just one line Monoku, Subimal. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/29/2020 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations, Subimal! Strong imagery.
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Date: 8/29/2020 5:27:00 AM
Indeed a deep gesture gone unappreciated...Congrats on your win Subimal.
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Date: 8/29/2020 4:21:00 AM
Phoolon se sajaaya pyar ka rastha tumhare sath chalne ke liye, Lekin Muraj gaye Sare phool aapke intezarme!! Urdu translation of your Monoku! Brilliant!! Krish
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 5:13:00 AM
Thanks Subimal! That shayer is hidden in you! I provided the voice!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/29/2020 5:04:00 AM
Shayer.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/29/2020 5:03:00 AM
Thanks, Krish. Yours is more appealing than mine. You created a beautiful shatter.
Date: 8/29/2020 4:15:00 AM
This is superb! Will sound even more powerful if written in Urdu! Congrats on your top win!!
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Date: 8/29/2020 2:45:00 AM
Such is the fate of love... nice one... Congratulations on first place in the contest..
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Date: 8/26/2020 5:50:00 AM
Beautiful and sad SSR, :)kelli
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/29/2020 5:05:00 AM
Thanks, SS, for the placement.

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