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Wilt Petals

red passionate rose
dances, dropping wilt petals 
wan ivory keys

piano plays endless notes,
sobbing hushed old ardent tune 

6/26/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 4:36 PM
Very lovely, Eve!
Makama Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 9:57 AM
This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.
Roper Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 10:13 AM
You have made my day, Funom, thank you so very much for the very uplifting words.. dear friend<3
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 3:34 PM
somber in mood and yet beautifully crafted.. you amaze, eve.. huggs
Roper Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 6:57 PM
Thank you, Nette,~*
Allison Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 3:40 AM
Very beautiful Eve and the accompanying picture is perfect:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 12:45 PM
thank you so very much ~*
Andresen Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 3:22 AM
- Beautiful written, Eve - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 6:56 PM
Thank you, Sunshine, hope you read my other Haikus ~*
Wolf Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 12:03 AM
This is so beautiful, Eve!!! Best of luck to you
Roper Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 6:54 PM
Thank you so very much, WW ~*
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