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Willy Wonka

Willy Wonka sang the cheeriest of songs to every child he did see. For what other adult could eat candy all day long and not get a single cavity?

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Caleah Buil

Date: 5/31/2013 12:06:00 PM

Hehehe, he had a cavity....just never told anyone, lol! I loved this one! ;)

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/31/2013 11:27:00 PM

One of the few musicals I halfway enjoyed... it's a classic for sure! How embarrassing would that be to admit to his cavity though... he he he...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/25/2013 4:15:00 PM

wheyy.. i delight in this clerihew; you whipped it up with a punchy ending... candies now all eaten up... grrreat work!..:) huggs

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/25/2013 11:11:00 PM

Why thanks Nette! Appreciate the visit!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/25/2013 11:47:00 AM

- You would get a stomach ache ...... rather eat carrots, Timothy. - A very well written clerihew!- (Re - read my last haiku, please....) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/27/2013 12:27:00 PM

- It sounded good :) -

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/25/2013 10:42:00 PM

What about a compromise? ... chocolate covered carrots, eh, EH? LOL!

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 5/25/2013 11:47:00 AM

I love chocolates. But I am forbidden, d-i-a-b-e-t-e-s ha! ha!. I love Charlie & the Chocolate Factory. Though the book meant for kids, I enjoyed it, and read several times. Oompa Loompa! I love that name. Richard is right here, very cute! Hugs 4 u Thanks for your Reply to my ABC doubt.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/25/2013 10:41:00 PM

Candy is a blessing and a curse... sorry to hear about the diabetes, thought I guess in a way it can be a good thing. Forces you to stay away from all the bad-for-you stuff!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/25/2013 8:26:00 AM

I have a sudden urge for chocalate. Cute limerick.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/25/2013 9:21:00 AM

Give in to your chocolatey desires... GIVE IN!

Richard D Seal

Date: 5/25/2013 6:43:00 AM

Oh the lure of the sugar, this has given me toothache just reading it lol. hmmmmmmm just checked, think it's time to visit the dentist lol Thanks for that Tim. Take care, Richard

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/25/2013 9:19:00 AM

Hmm... never heard of that one! I guess all the candy would be fine (just as long as you brush your teeth half a dozen times a day.... he he).

Richard D Seal
Date: 5/25/2013 6:48:00 AM

This reminds me of the Alice Cooper song, 'Unfinished Sweet', if memory serves there's a line in it goes, 'And the rotten tooh fairy is satisfied'.