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Young Willy arranged to go camping alas, he struggled erecting his tent he tweeted he had terrible ******** problems I hope his parents knew what he meant! Next year he said he’ll go glamping or hire a log cabin out in the wood then he won’t have ******** difficulties and his tweets can’t be misunderstood! 8/1/18

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Date: 8/8/2018 12:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! Lol oh that Willy...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/8/2018 2:49:00 PM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/7/2018 8:08:00 PM
Congrats on POTD!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/8/2018 2:49:00 PM
Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/5/2018 12:34:00 PM
Lol! Jan, This is funny. Poor, poor Willy. As you know poetry is subjective. Some will like what you write and others won't. In my book humor is the best medicine ever! Write on limerick Queen. Congratulations on getting the poem of day:-) Alexis
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/5/2018 12:42:00 PM
Thanks Alexis, and thanks for adding to the Male Menopause collaboration its lovely to see other poets having fun:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/4/2018 11:12:00 AM
If we can't have a little fun, what's the point? Congratulations Jan...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/4/2018 11:42:00 AM
Exactly Charlie, poetry doesn't have to be stuffy and intellectual and can only be understood by the person who wrote it!:-) I just try and bring a little light hearted humour to the site:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 10:13:00 PM
oh, this is so good! was it your "intent" to be so funny? Congrats for POTD... From me and Budgie
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/4/2018 2:19:00 AM
ha ha ha no 'intent' at all its down to interpretation and based on recent observation of youngsters trying to put up a tent lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 10:07:00 PM
Congrats on POTD and a well written witty poem! I think you may have hit a nerve with someone here LOL
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/4/2018 2:17:00 AM
Oh I am inspired Arthur - got a 4 stanza limerick to post on toe fungus and then working on one on the male menopause - I'll never be bullied on the site again - I'm like a weeble now you can knock me but I will bounce back:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 6:15:00 PM
There's no place for such sarcasm as was directed at you below, Jan. I recall him pulling a similar act of ridicule on Anne-Lise, but I'm sure you're not about to remove your verses. Nor should you. What about the old saying..."If you can't say something nice....."
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arthur vaso
Date: 8/3/2018 11:11:00 PM
Harper Lee, a great author, had words of wisdom about this! Sadly some will never listen.
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/3/2018 6:23:00 PM
LOL My fingers are itching to join you. ;-)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 6:18:00 PM
Oh I will never be bullied and put down again Lin, in fact I'm writing a poem about a manky toenail, will try and finish it tomorrow and then start on a poem about the male menopause!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 3:46:00 PM
hahaha. Congrats to you, Jan!! On POTD
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 4:07:00 PM
Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 3:27:00 PM
Lol ... Mine is a pop up ... congratulations on POTD.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/4/2018 9:37:00 AM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
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arthur vaso
Date: 8/3/2018 10:06:00 PM
Mine Pops up too now and then!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 3:29:00 PM
Ha ha no erection issues in the Smith tent then lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 3:20:00 PM
Thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 11:27:00 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD Hugs Eve
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 3:21:00 PM
Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 10:37:00 AM
Woo hoo! Love that an erection pun poem got POTD!! You were the woman to make that happen!! ;-)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 3:25:00 PM
LOL Nina:-) I was surprised it got POTD just shows a little humour is appreciated:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 10:15:00 AM
Dead lol
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Anna:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 9:08:00 AM
Jan congrats on your POTD. I'm still laughing.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Warren, glad I made you smile:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 7:52:00 AM
More giggles and ongratulations! <3
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/3/2018 8:16:00 AM
Oh I hear you there ;p xxx oh mo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Mo I know my humour isn't everyone's cup of tea so POTD was a lovely surprise:-):-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 7:49:00 AM
Lol, this was a really nice and fun little write,when he said"erecting problems"he should have been more explicit or if he would have chosen his words more carefully, there sure wouldn't be a misunderstanding and even next year, he could went to camping, anyway many congratulations to you on your poem being chosen as POTD, I really enjoyed reading it, good luck and have a really nice day
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Faraz:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 7:11:00 AM
Congrats Jan, on poem of the day!
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Date: 8/3/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Vijay:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 5:39:00 AM
This should win the tent poll.....
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 8:11:00 AM
lol John:-) hugs Jan xx
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John lawless
Date: 8/3/2018 5:43:00 AM
OH YEAH.....CONGRATS ON THE POTD.....TA DA!!!!
Date: 8/3/2018 4:49:00 AM
I think there is a little blue book on the market to help in erecting tents. I love your humor my friend. Congrats on POTD. John
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 8:09:00 AM
ha ha ha John love that comment:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 3:46:00 AM
Poor old Willy...his dysfunctionality erecting tents has come a long way...Willy is a wuss lol...Congrats!!! my friend on your POTD!...thanks for making us smile Jan...love & Willy...^WW^
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thanks ^WW^:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 3:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTD Jan with this hilarious poem, so cleverly written. :))
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Roy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 1:53:00 AM
This was a hoot Jan....so clever and funny and cute. I loved it! Congratulations on having it honored with POTD! : )
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 2:30:00 AM
I'm delighted it got POTD! :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/3/2018 1:25:00 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD Jan. Well deserved too. Tom
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 2:27:00 AM
I'm gobsmacked to get POTD - am delighted to see some humour on soup getting the honour it is very lacking at times:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/2/2018 4:58:00 AM
Ha ha, very fun and entertaining!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 2:26:00 AM
Thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/1/2018 8:50:00 PM
Hahaha..This is a well written poem with a great flow, I absolutely love reading it, Jan, things like this does happen.. Hugs Eve
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/3/2018 2:25:00 AM
Thanks Eve, just a silly idea that grew into a poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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