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Willy

Their once was a fellow named Willy Who would sometimes act very silly He would smoke pot too much Drink beer, whiskey and such Made him run around willy-nilly

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Date: 8/19/2011 11:15:00 PM
Nice humor, Charles
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Date: 8/19/2011 9:35:00 PM
lol.. have met a few willies in my life.. ,, ps. if ya want, read it outloud and see if droppin' the "way" in the third line and the "with" in the fourth line makes a difference.... maybe a word one syllable word before the willinilliness in line 5? Happy weekend to ya, Charles
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Date: 8/19/2011 10:35:00 PM
Your absolutly right - Thanks, I have made the change, And a happy weekend to you too

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