Willy

Their once was a fellow named Willy
Who would sometimes act very silly
He would smoke pot too much
Drink beer, whiskey and such
Made him run around willy-nilly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 11:15 PM
Nice humor, Charles
Jones Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 9:35 PM
lol.. have met a few willies in my life.. ,, ps. if ya want, read it outloud and see if droppin' the "way" in the third line and the "with" in the fourth line makes a difference.... maybe a word one syllable word before the willinilliness in line 5? Happy weekend to ya, Charles
Sides Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 10:35 PM
Your absolutly right - Thanks, I have made the change, And a happy weekend to you too
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