Willows (1)

Willows whisper gratitude, 
drooping branches sway, 
they promise summers of serenity 
and winters of decay.

Images of grace, gently shivering 
in rains of sweet intent, 
they burgeon like a testament 
fulfilled and immanent.

Softly ornamenting 
with their sprawls of elegance, 
they pose like seasoned lovers 
who have earned their permanance.

Sprightly dancing limbs of fancy, 
mighty yet demure, 
they prophesy endurance 
for those untested and unsure.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Ginn Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 9:54 AM
darn this is a good poem and no time to read, I'll check it later (mail call)
Riley Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 8:12 AM
I always love the willow tree, though the neighbors hate the mess they make. You framed them perfectly. Again Great work. JudyRiley
Mac Donald Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 9:35 AM
Well oh well, you rascal, I had looked all over for #1, after I'd read #2...but I suppose some things are made more special when they are tempered by patience.:) This is smooth and flowing..it skims over the surface of one's mind. Beautifully penned, Keith! Best wishes to you and yours....God bless!! Love, Mikki
Fawcett Avatar
December 20, 2008 at 1:33 PM
Great write, Keith. I love poems about trees and this is idyllic. Sincere thanks for all your support and comments. Nigel
George   Avatar
December 20, 2008 at 7:03 AM
so soft and beautiful - almost senual. I am moving onward to part two. Llainie
Gass Avatar
December 19, 2008 at 9:59 PM
Just had to comment on this one again because it is so lovely. The second couplet really stood out this time as I read it. You are truly an inspiration to me to become a better writer! Love Robin
Gass Avatar
December 19, 2008 at 3:59 PM
This is so lovely. The rhyme and rhythm is perfect. The flow feels like a caress when read. I agree with Christie "sprightly..." wonderful line! Well said! Love Robin
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