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'willow Weep'

'Willow Weep' The willow Tree Is standing There Without a Thought, Without a Care. Anchored deep It hugs The earth, No hint Of laughter None of Mirth. It softly Sways In gentle Breeze That barely Touches Other trees. With slender Leaves And branches Long, Its cooing Now A mournful Song. But why So sad, This stately Tree That stands So tall, And seems So free. What event In ancient Time Now leads Us to Much metric Rhyme, Of weeping Willows Crying softly, Bearing sadness Standing loftly. A contradiction This weeping Tree, That brings Such joy To you And Me.

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Date: 1/27/2019 11:18:00 AM
Hello Buddy Black, the weeping willow tree is beautiful. It gives a person lots of shade from the sun. One of my favourite trees. Have a nice day my friend. So nice ro meet you.
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Date: 1/13/2018 2:34:00 PM
WOW! Buddy, you sure nailed this one. I agree totally with the Silent One. You seem like a talented poet. Welcome to Soup, Brother. By the way, there is an open contest and the willow tree is one of the topics one may choose to write about for the contest. Just a thought!!
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Date: 7/20/2017 11:53:00 AM
Hi Buddy, this is such a sweet smooth rhythmic read. I love the ride!
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Date: 7/17/2017 5:40:00 AM
This is really weird, I was thinking about writing a poem about weeping willow and I saw this today. A great write, you seem like a talented poet..
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Date: 7/15/2017 8:38:00 PM
enjoyed this poem. very thoughtful, and liked the way it was set out.
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Date: 7/3/2017 7:33:00 AM
Such a nice write! Nice poem Buddy
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Date: 6/22/2017 1:12:00 AM
Love, love, love the metrical tale told here. The form is correct, it rhymes, and even though you used short sentences between 1 and 4 syllables short, it reads fluently. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Date: 6/20/2017 6:55:00 PM
Like your form and your feeling for the tree. It is indeed a contradiction, but I've always loved weeping willows. Welcome to PS.
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