Willow in Window Frame

Willows waving in the window frame.
Six cheerful mice dancing on the door.
I’ve changed my sweater to the same;
It’s gray as the daytime clouds outdoor.

Deciduously delicate as lace, ne’er still.
Dependent on limbs, movement with wind.
Inside the poet’s space, her spouse sawmill.
Does he dream of the zigzag step incline

Or a lovely walk to church on Easter Sunday?
Does he trace the smiles and shadows of sun
And the rising of our Savior; celebration heyday
As we praise shoulder to shoulder as one?

The willows wiggle like children on the pews;
Dressed in Spring green, sunny yellow, sky blue.
Like branches, the mothers hold them in the queue,
Though little bodies, hats and ties are all askew.

The poet’s husband’s hopped up in time,
Forgotten what was on his mind, in sleep.
The writer’s rat-a-tat-tat must quit her rhyme
And ask her tree for help with counting sheep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 8:11 PM
This has a lot of deep metaphors, not to mention breathtaking language. <3
Rodrigues Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 10:42 AM
Thank you for all the reads, sweet one!
Harp Avatar
April 9, 2026 at 4:16 AM
Wow, Kim, you have artfully packed a lot of images here, relating all of them to each other. I love "husband's sawmill" for snoring, and praising shoulder to shoulder as one. Beautiful! Moon Harp
Rodrigues Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 10:43 AM
Glad you like those parts, my friend! Hugs
DiMino Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 3:48 PM
"The willows wiggle like children on the pews; Dressed in Spring green, sunny yellow, sky blue. Like branches, the mothers hold them in the queue, Though little bodies, hats and ties are all askew." -- Love that. The best poet! Writer's mind never sleeps...just willow weeps to a lesser degree. Have a blessed Easter my friend. He is risen!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 4:45 AM
Blessings on this Easter Day! Thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 4:23 AM
How I admire your rhyming skills. I wrote a terza rima, and it took me ages. That's why I go for free verse. Loved your alliteration too. Happy Easter.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 6:53 AM
Thank you kindly, Victor! Hugs
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