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Willingness- First Place Contest Winner

"The amount of good luck coming your way depends on your willingness to act". Quote by Barbara Sher
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Whispers of disobedience float in the air. A challenge beyond the conformity snare An inability or refusal to shift or comply However, awareness stirs—a probing stare. Prejudice dances with arrogance—and defy Forcefulness quality—firm fervor to untie. Rebellion and lack of collaboration clash. Invest in openness—it's time to stroll and fly. Refusal and firmness oppose ceding or crash. Willfulness, otherwise, is wisdom gained to dash. Mastery gives way to mystery—humility to adore. As the spirit discovers its own rhythm and flash.   When you act from the depths of your soul's core. You sense a river flowing—a delight you can't ignore. Award-winning is optional, as has been shown. However, the drive to prevail is a factor to explore. Vocation isn't from having a strong will alone. It involves listening and finding your unique tone. The dance of will and stubbornness—a path of dread A delicate equilibrium, a magnificent finesse throne So let your resolve lead you—push you ahead. Listen for the hushed voice of willingness instead. For in the rhythm of these two, a dance to adjoin Therein is the beauty of growth—wisdom to be said. Let us, therefore, accept both sides of the coin. The determination and commitment to join. In the dance of avarice and openness line. We uncover our true glory, our inner enjoin.   In the vast symphony of life's grand design Willpower and flexibility dance—intertwine. Because it is at the junction of these two. That we find our essence and its true sign.
1st place contest winner
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Miller Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 2:17 AM
Brilliantly written; congratulations
May Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 3:23 PM
Well penned Sotto, Congrats n your win
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 12:10 PM
- Back to congratulate you on your win, Las :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 11:22 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful/wonderful ~ write/picture. Have a great day.............
Alex Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 7:39 AM
"Vocation isn't from having a strong will alone. It involves listening and finding your unique tone" - Great work. Congratulations!
Anaya Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 2:24 PM
I’m skimming through a paradigm-altering book, “You Are the Placebo”, a world where the secret of the placebo is the foundation of everyday life—a game changer—you are the placebo, says the author. It has to do with willingness to change your mind. You have covered what many a poet here wants to express in this piece! Faving to read over again S.P.
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 12:44 PM
Very nice, Sotto. I especially liked the message and imagery of verse 6.
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 10:15 AM
- The will controls us a lot ... positivity is the word ... it can turn our everyday life around - Beautifully written and wise words, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Mcintosh Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 9:19 AM
Wonderful words, so brilliant and so beautifully spoken (written). Much love sent your way, friend. God bless you, Gina
Pandit Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 6:28 AM
Let us, therefore, accept both sides of the coin. The determination and commitment to join-- a thoughtful discourse, Lasaad. Powerful words of advice throughout.
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