Will You Stop?

Will you stop?


Will 
you stop?
when will you?
until you're dead?
when,when will you stop?
can't you see it's killing you?
slowly to death, yourself you carry
injustice to you, and all who care
please, stop this now, before it gets too late!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Gass Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 8:56 AM
Very good etheree. Very deep felt emotion through this, Maryam. Powerful words that would surely touch the heart of the intended and make them listen. Well said! Love, Robn
Shokry Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 11:17 AM
OK I will , promise...........
Montgomery Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 9:18 AM
great poem.. talk to me on the chat..lol
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