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Will You Let Me Sleep

Violet hues Birds in flight coo's Starburst fashion Sun's hot passion Crystal streams Valleys of green Sno-capped peaks Eagles that speaks Call of the wild Echoes of a lost child Can't seem to wake From this dormate faith Have no fear For vision is clear Arrived at Heaven's shore Was woken though by husband's dam snore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/4/2010 4:46:00 AM
Congrats for the win. Fine rhyming
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Date: 4/3/2010 8:50:00 PM
the last line is the killer!!! LOVED that line. Congrats. Andrea
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Date: 3/27/2010 8:42:00 PM
Congrats Katherine on your winning poem in the I Dreamed contest.. great write and win for u to enjoy on your trip to the winners circle ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/14/2010 9:19:00 AM
Amazing! What the mind can come up with when it is disturbed by something while asleep. Smile! Cute Poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/12/2010 7:57:00 AM
VERY NICE SO TRUE MY HUSBANDS SNORE IS CRAZY BEST WISHES FOR A GOOD NIGHT SLEEP FALESHIA
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Date: 3/12/2010 7:53:00 AM
I loved this enchanted and funny poem.. well cone.. Constance
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Date: 3/12/2010 6:41:00 AM
Such a lovely dream filled with beautiful images, Katherine. Too bad you had to wake up to your "husband's damn snore" as soon as you "arrived at Heaven's shore." Thank you for sharing your dream; wasn't expecting the laugh I had when I reached the last line! Love, Carolyn
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