Will You Let Me Sleep

Violet hues
Birds in flight coo's

Starburst fashion
Sun's hot passion

Crystal streams
Valleys of green

Sno-capped peaks
Eagles that speaks

Call of the wild
Echoes of a lost child

Can't seem to wake
From this dormate faith

Have no fear
For vision is  clear


Arrived at Heaven's shore
Was woken though by husband's dam snore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
April 4, 2010 at 4:46 AM
Congrats for the win. Fine rhyming
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 8:50 PM
the last line is the killer!!! LOVED that line. Congrats. Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 8:42 PM
Congrats Katherine on your winning poem in the I Dreamed contest.. great write and win for u to enjoy on your trip to the winners circle ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Freeman Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 9:19 AM
Amazing! What the mind can come up with when it is disturbed by something while asleep. Smile! Cute Poem. Agape, Moses
Murphy Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 7:57 AM
VERY NICE SO TRUE MY HUSBANDS SNORE IS CRAZY BEST WISHES FOR A GOOD NIGHT SLEEP FALESHIA
La France Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 7:53 AM
I loved this enchanted and funny poem.. well cone.. Constance
Devonshire Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 6:41 AM
Such a lovely dream filled with beautiful images, Katherine. Too bad you had to wake up to your "husband's damn snore" as soon as you "arrived at Heaven's shore." Thank you for sharing your dream; wasn't expecting the laugh I had when I reached the last line! Love, Carolyn
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