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Will You Kindly Marry Me

There have been times when I look at you and my heart starts to patter, there are moments I've shared with you when you're all that matters. Six years have passed since you've stolen my heart until it was free, and sixty more to come with an eternity if you would kindly marry me. Many may be skeptical knowing a woman proposed to the man, well baby, we've already agreed, no one will ever understand. Here is your sparkling white gold ring with a few accent diamonds, please say yes to my proposal and we shall create our own island. The passion we share is so delicate as your hand caresses my hair, at times when we're alone I feel your warmth as you stare. Please join me and let's create a family of love to remember, you know I've always wanted to wed in late September. I carry such deep faith in us knowing we will last a lifetime, for it will always be just us, I am yours and you are mine. So here is one yellow rose I give to you while on bent knee, I'm awaiting patiently for your answer...will you kindly marry me? Date Written: June 23, 2001 Date Posted: January 28, 2016 ***This is a poem I read to my boyfriend (now husband) when I proposed to him at age 21. I don't have it written on paper anymore, but I watched my wedding video and found it. We've been happily married for almost 15 years now***

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Date: 8/2/2016 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Laura, love is so warm, I enjoyed reading, thank you for entering. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/2/2016 4:57:00 AM
Great to re read this LoLoooooooooooooooo :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/4/2016 1:13:00 AM
Wonderful Poem to win the first place. Congrats Laura. Hugs. Anisha D
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Date: 2/4/2016 12:50:00 AM
What a charming and lovely memory of your proposal Laura. Congratulations on a first place win. Very deserving! #7
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Date: 2/3/2016 11:26:00 AM
Nice poem, Laura. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/3/2016 11:48:00 AM
Thank you Sandra :) *Smiles* -luloo
Date: 2/3/2016 8:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/3/2016 11:47:00 AM
Thank you very much :) *Smiles* -luloo
Date: 2/3/2016 4:56:00 AM
Wow...He is lucky to receive such poetic proposal......Awesome Poem and Congrats for Winning first place again.
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Date: 2/3/2016 7:42:00 AM
Many thanks M Asim :) -luloo
Date: 2/2/2016 10:06:00 PM
Wow! What a proposing poetry, Luloo? Loved it. Cheers, Bobby
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Date: 2/3/2016 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Bobby :) -luloo
Date: 2/2/2016 7:48:00 PM
Deep commitment is so evident in this poem of love !! A sure winner, Laura ! Congratulations on your number 1 place!!
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Date: 2/2/2016 7:51:00 PM
DITTO lady!! Many thanks-luloo
Date: 2/2/2016 5:49:00 PM
Oh what a co incidence LuLoo ... I proposed to my hubby on Valentine's day and it wasn't a leap year either lol - the ironic thing is we NEVER celebrate the day it is just a commercial venture and I don't need one day to remind my hubby I love him:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/2/2016 6:05:00 PM
Funny, we have never celebrated VD either. Maybe a little in high school but all it is is a hallmark holiday for chocolate and cards. Why can't you do that all year long, why only one day a year?? Makes no sense. I didn't propose on VD, it was June 2001. So cute you proposed to your hubby also!! They are some lucky men, huh??? lol -luloo *smiles*
Date: 2/2/2016 5:40:00 PM
Beautiful words and congratulations on your win! Congratulations on your 20 years also!
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Date: 2/2/2016 7:46:00 PM
Thank you Susan :) *smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/28/2016 10:22:00 AM
Splendid is the love! Fancy`s rhyme like a glove.Congrat.
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