Kash Poet Poet Dizain

Will You Join Me

Today I will enjoy the sun
drink every drop of golden light
sing the nursery rhymes for fun
and spread my wings again for  flight
I'll soar above to gain new height
rainbows will kiss on the forehead
as twilight paints my wings bright red
a flight above the deep blue sea.

But all the above joys will fade
if you do not smile and join me.


*iambic tetrameter
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Placement:3rd (Feb 2012)

Contest:Change the Meters

Sponsor:Debi  Guzzie

By:kashinath karmakar

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Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2015 at 7:05 PM refreshing my memory of this one So many gems you wrote when you were active here. I miss you so much. Happy New Year, Kashinath.

Carol Sunshine Brown February 7, 2012 at 8:15 AM Congratulations to you on your win in Debbie Guzzi 's "Change for the Meter" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan February 6, 2012 at 9:14 AM I like "twilight paints my wings bright red.." great line. Life is better when we have someone to share things with, for sure. Congratulations on your win!

Allan Williams February 6, 2012 at 1:26 AM nice win, thank you, Al

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 6, 2012 at 12:53 AM I think a lot o fpeople would join you, kash! This is a very uplifting write and I truly enjoyed how you described this sunny day -- what a fun day! Super congrats on your win!! :D

Andrea Dietrich February 5, 2012 at 10:42 PM Kash, I am very impressed. not even a native English speaker and you took third place in metered contest. BIG congrats. well, my sexy man, by the way, IS sensitive. He lets other people shine!!! I can't do comments tonight. I have too much else to do tonight. But just wanted to say hi to a few folks and get back to my preparations for class tomorrow. Luv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi February 5, 2012 at 5:43 PM Sometimes fluidity and content much out weigh perfection in form for it is the flaws that make us both beautiful and human. Congrad's my friend a privelge as always to visit your heart. Light & Love

Maureen Lefanue February 5, 2012 at 3:51 PM I'll join you, Kash, great poem and congratulations on your win! Cheers, Maureen

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 5, 2012 at 12:20 PM Nice one . congratulations Kash x

Jon Arno February 5, 2012 at 11:35 AM Enjoyed the colors :) Beautiful write and congratulations on your finish in the contest. Best, Jon

Joyce Johnson February 5, 2012 at 10:51 AM Congratulation on your win Kash. Love, joyce

David Williams February 5, 2012 at 10:34 AM Kash congrats on your teriffic win..David

Joe Maverick February 5, 2012 at 10:14 AM Well put Kash, well worded,, and congratulations on a winning entry..)

Nette Onclaud February 5, 2012 at 10:11 AM delighted by the wonder of this write, kashi buddy!.. congrats on your glowing win, rhymer!.:)

Bob Quigley February 5, 2012 at 8:57 AM Very nicely written Kash. Well done and congratulations

Carol Sunshine Brown September 25, 2011 at 2:42 PM Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's "Dizain" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song September 22, 2011 at 8:14 PM This is a winner for me..off to me treasure trove of favorites. Imaginative like Peter Pan and Tinkerbell...just loads of air moving fun. Did u say we would dip our toes in the ocean? What a fun time this would be! Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire September 22, 2011 at 5:58 PM Most of the entries were sad, Kash, but yours allowed me to fly beside you in bless. Thanks so much for brightening my day and congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

John Freeman September 22, 2011 at 2:00 PM Kashinath, I quite enjoyed reading your worthy verse. Congrtulations on your lovely presentation for Dr Ram's contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 22, 2011 at 10:56 AM Congrats Kash on 7th place exciting win with exceptional poetry my friend.. always dynamic your words..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta September 22, 2011 at 6:27 AM Conmgratulations on the win in my contest, kashinath

Gwendolen Song September 14, 2011 at 12:42 AM Finals done!! .....We are joining you here from OHIO....a loooooong flight above the deep blue sea! The tone of your invitation is so upbeat, Kash! I like the end the most...it shows the somber mood of disappointment if your expectations aren't met! So whimsical and light! Congrats on all these contests u are slam dunkin! Your pen is on fire! Just months away from publishing a great book of poetry!! Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown September 12, 2011 at 10:27 AM I would like to take this time to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. I would also like to let you know I always enjoy reading your wonderful poetry Kashinath. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud September 12, 2011 at 7:29 AM i am so draw to this, kashi... so innocent, so child like..okay, i'm sold; i'll join you!... lkey lots! :) huggs, nette Nette Onclaud September 12, 2011 at 7:29 AM *drawn*

Connie Marcum Wong September 12, 2011 at 12:09 AM Your words soothe like a fragrant balm, a tonic of ambrosia, a cool dip in the sea. I love your poetry! This should do wonderfully in the contest.

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