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Today I will enjoy the sun drink every drop of golden light sing the nursery rhymes for fun and spread my wings again for flight I'll soar above to gain new height rainbows will kiss on the forehead as twilight paints my wings bright red a flight above the deep blue sea. But all the above joys will fade if you do not smile and join me. *iambic tetrameter ========================= Placement:3rd (Feb 2012) Contest:Change the Meters Sponsor:Debi Guzzie By:kashinath karmakar

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Date: 1/3/2015 7:05:00 PM
refreshing my memory of this one So many gems you wrote when you were active here. I miss you so much. Happy New Year, Kashinath.
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Date: 2/7/2012 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Debbie Guzzi 's "Change for the Meter" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2012 9:14:00 AM
I like "twilight paints my wings bright red.." great line. Life is better when we have someone to share things with, for sure. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/6/2012 1:26:00 AM
nice win, thank you, Al
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Date: 2/6/2012 12:53:00 AM
I think a lot o fpeople would join you, kash! This is a very uplifting write and I truly enjoyed how you described this sunny day -- what a fun day! Super congrats on your win!! :D
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:42:00 PM
Kash, I am very impressed. not even a native English speaker and you took third place in metered contest. BIG congrats. well, my sexy man, by the way, IS sensitive. He lets other people shine!!! I can't do comments tonight. I have too much else to do tonight. But just wanted to say hi to a few folks and get back to my preparations for class tomorrow. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/5/2012 5:43:00 PM
Sometimes fluidity and content much out weigh perfection in form for it is the flaws that make us both beautiful and human. Congrad's my friend a privelge as always to visit your heart. Light & Love
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Date: 2/5/2012 3:51:00 PM
I'll join you, Kash, great poem and congratulations on your win! Cheers, Maureen
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Date: 2/5/2012 12:20:00 PM
Nice one . congratulations Kash x
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Date: 2/5/2012 11:35:00 AM
Enjoyed the colors :) Beautiful write and congratulations on your finish in the contest. Best, Jon
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:51:00 AM
Congratulation on your win Kash. Love, joyce
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:34:00 AM
Kash congrats on your teriffic win..David
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:14:00 AM
Well put Kash, well worded,, and congratulations on a winning entry..)
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:11:00 AM
delighted by the wonder of this write, kashi buddy!.. congrats on your glowing win, rhymer!.:)
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Date: 2/5/2012 8:57:00 AM
Very nicely written Kash. Well done and congratulations
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Date: 9/25/2011 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's "Dizain" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2011 8:14:00 PM
This is a winner for me..off to me treasure trove of favorites. Imaginative like Peter Pan and Tinkerbell...just loads of air moving fun. Did u say we would dip our toes in the ocean? What a fun time this would be! Gwendolen
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Date: 9/22/2011 5:58:00 PM
Most of the entries were sad, Kash, but yours allowed me to fly beside you in bless. Thanks so much for brightening my day and congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/22/2011 2:00:00 PM
Kashinath, I quite enjoyed reading your worthy verse. Congrtulations on your lovely presentation for Dr Ram's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/22/2011 10:56:00 AM
Congrats Kash on 7th place exciting win with exceptional poetry my friend.. always dynamic your words..luv..
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Date: 9/22/2011 6:27:00 AM
Conmgratulations on the win in my contest, kashinath
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Date: 9/14/2011 12:42:00 AM
Finals done!! .....We are joining you here from OHIO....a loooooong flight above the deep blue sea! The tone of your invitation is so upbeat, Kash! I like the end the most...it shows the somber mood of disappointment if your expectations aren't met! So whimsical and light! Congrats on all these contests u are slam dunkin! Your pen is on fire! Just months away from publishing a great book of poetry!! Gwendolen
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Date: 9/12/2011 10:27:00 AM
I would like to take this time to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. I would also like to let you know I always enjoy reading your wonderful poetry Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2011 7:29:00 AM
i am so draw to this, kashi... so innocent, so child like..okay, i'm sold; i'll join you!... lkey lots! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/12/2011 7:29:00 AM
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:09:00 AM
Your words soothe like a fragrant balm, a tonic of ambrosia, a cool dip in the sea. I love your poetry! This should do wonderfully in the contest.
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