Will She

Will she stop being ever so stubborn making things so difficult? Though she's built tougher than iron she knows not who she hurt. Will she ever love him again forgive trespasses and guilt? All that's left are bones and veins exposed never to be rebuilt. Will she come back to his arms forsaking genuine love and charms? If she doth return to the fold will she treasure the work, his gold? Will she learn to smile again overlook the small details? A long face is all in vain why expose all doubts and fails? Will she learn to be contented no that his hands are free from stain; Heaven or hell is how thou maketh' choose the joy that will remain. Will she ever learn that God is Just both parties wrong before His sight; can he learn to love as now lost O' Lord please help, stretch forth Thy Might.

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Alfred Berggren

Date: 7/31/2017 3:00:00 PM

Forgive and forget - move on and hope for the best.

John Leong
Date: 8/2/2017 5:57:00 AM

yes! Amen! to forgive thy neighbour is a start towards loving them; in forgiving we are thus forgiven by God, and starting a new day with a clean sheet is very, very important in our lives as a christian. thanks for popping by! cheers!

Verlecia Fields

Date: 5/19/2017 11:59:00 AM

the poem is very strong and caring - there's a great lesson to take all to God

John Leong
Date: 5/20/2017 1:15:00 PM

i'm smiling as i write this; i feel happy that you enjoyed this, praise the Lord! we're in His hands, amen.

Niall Fulham

Date: 5/16/2017 3:33:00 PM

Hi John , very enjoyable read deep and emotional to the core, Wondering if's , your flow in this write is beautiful :)) hugs from Ireland

John Leong
Date: 5/20/2017 1:17:00 PM

thank you, Niall; i am glad that this piece found your liking, all glory to the Lord! May He continually inspire us to spread the word of love. cheers!