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Will Hereafter Come

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Gradually, rays of sky dim A stark blanket wrapping the woodlands Night...too cold Each branch thinning across clayed earth And I am wrought with blaming thoughts .. Birds growling my loneliness I search for lamplight's glint Still the pain and angush return A wound , an abrasion that diesn't heal Emptying 'me again where thoughts beg; will hereafter null this existence? ~ 8/21/2019 Revised What If There Was No Tomorrow Contest Sponsor: Silent One ~

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 8/30/2019 3:49:00 PM

Your style quite capitaviting, congrats!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/27/2019 7:06:00 AM

You write so brilliantly--well deserved win at the very top..congrats on #1, Nette.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 8/25/2019 3:56:00 PM

Your poetic wordsflail and move with the ocean tide ; , I was really moved, nette!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/25/2019 9:22:00 AM

Again...cautious circumstance...I believe you are crossing bridges, Nette...you are a worthy winner...jim

John Lawless

Date: 8/25/2019 8:38:00 AM

"...will hereafter null this existence?..." The forever question answered in poetic perfection....great job Nette....a well earned top spot..

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/25/2019 7:14:00 AM

"How bitter this pang of aloneness" - you deserved the win here! I am glad you got it!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/25/2019 1:18:00 AM

This is so good Nette...love the line "until turbulent waves slapped my face..." . Congratulations on your Gold Medal honor! : ) xxoo

Eve Roper

Date: 8/24/2019 10:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs Eve

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/24/2019 3:35:00 PM

Wonderful write,Nette .Congrats on your lovely win in this contest.

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/24/2019 1:58:00 PM

Pretty words here! Hereafter - let us hope so! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

John Hamilton

Date: 8/24/2019 1:36:00 PM

Great winning poem Nette as only you can write, congrats on a big win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2019 8:24:00 AM

- Can really feel this deep into the pores, Nette - A fantastic poem - Congratulations on your top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/24/2019 7:54:00 AM

Congrats on your top placement in SO’s contest Nette. He has excellent taste in poetry. Hugs Rick.

Silent One

Date: 8/24/2019 3:24:00 AM

Wow, what imagery... i found this a moving piece, your words took me on a journey.... poem is full of great lines and as always a great use of vocabulary.... Love the second stanza, i found you poem haunting and you adapted to the theme very well... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 8/23/2019 10:43:00 AM

You have powerfully displayed an inner turmoil.. a soul "alone with the alone"! I have the feel of awe and the scent of mystery! Dear Nette, you have a masterful pen that painted in an outshining beauty the depth of your perceptive heart and creative mind! So enchanted by your work! In my fave list. My warmest wishes. Love and hugs. Blessings.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/22/2019 8:37:00 PM

You never lose your magic Nette. Your poetry is as good today and ever. xo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/22/2019 2:53:00 PM

Anxiety and despair of hereafter permeates your poem..in your usual stylistic words and creation..much to ponder here..well written, as always, Nette.

Chris Green

Date: 8/22/2019 10:47:00 AM

Beautifully tormented is this piece of writing reaching out to find emptiness where tomorrow once stood

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/22/2019 2:28:00 AM

A frigtening thought nette, that feeling of dispair. Good luck. Tom.