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"You're here," he whispered from shadows My fragrance consorted before me Heady scent of musk-infused blooms Intoxicating allure, lustfully impure On the bed was an opened poetry book, across it pages, a perfect red rose Dark crimson, like the blood within me flows heated by need and the greed in his eyes There burned the wildfires of desire flames fanned as I moved nearer They reflected soft glimmers of the pearlized moon She, a naughty voyeur, peering in the night Through an open window she watched the rhythm of swaying shadows at play Seductive smile on my vermilion lips in a chamber painted amber by candlelight No need of their scintillation to see His touch was all I needed to guide me in flights of ecstacy as hands pleaded in sensual strokes Diamonds danced across a sapphire sky He breathed erotic sensations on my nape and slid a strap of the gown down my shoulder The pulse of his heart beat against my hand my other caressed the ruff at his temple Fuchsia fluttered on the trellised window Their aroma faded as I inhaled his balm We tasted love and savored passion Now sated and replete in a moment of calm Soft breezes swirled across warm silk sheets My hand trembled as I reached for him Wildfires reignited in his emerald eyes "The night is still young and the moon is asleep," I whispered. My intent was not disguised ~ 9/22/17 ~ The Poet's Fire Hosted by: Greg Barden

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Date: 12/9/2017 3:53:00 PM
You have beautifully addressed the theme, Lin, with this well-written sensuous poem. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/8/2017 7:34:00 AM
Back with congratulations :) hugs! xomo
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Date: 12/8/2017 5:58:00 AM
wow Lin I think we must have been away on holiday and I missed this sultry gem. many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/7/2017 11:44:00 PM
Just adored this write, Lin, and it was so sexy and libidinous ... it also left some things up to the imagination, and I think that's the sexiest element of ALL - letting the readers' minds do some of the work. Congratulations on FIFTH PLACE, and thank you for your patience! :-) <3
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Date: 10/23/2017 1:44:00 PM
I enjoyed this romantic poem. It is well written. have a nice day my friend.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/23/2017 2:23:00 PM
Thanks very much, Darlene.
Date: 10/20/2017 1:55:00 PM
Nice, very nice Lin Flights of ecstasy, nice.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/23/2017 2:23:00 PM
Fantasy...reality...in either case it would be wonderful. Thanks, Edward.
Date: 9/28/2017 7:13:00 AM
You my friend built a bonfire with this romantic and extremely sensual creation! What a great expression of love's intensity and romantic interludes. A fav...
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/23/2017 2:22:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Robert.
Date: 9/24/2017 12:12:00 AM
I aspire to be this good one day. :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/24/2017 5:57:00 AM
A charming comment, but you are a poet of great worth.
Date: 9/23/2017 10:29:00 AM
Sizzling!!!...best wishes...^WW^
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/23/2017 7:23:00 PM
Thank you ever so much, WW.
Date: 9/22/2017 12:38:00 PM
WOW! Now I'm all hot, where's my wife? You would do this to me Lin! Ugh! This is such a sensual write, so filled with poisonous pleasures at every whim! Such an ecstasy filled poem, I loved reading it this afternoon! What a fabulous piece, now I'm blushing, Great Work my friend!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/22/2017 1:53:00 PM
Oh Stop or you're going to make me blush. haha Russell. Thanks for the 'hot' comments!!
Date: 9/22/2017 10:26:00 AM
I need a cold shower now. Hot stuff! Sultry pen Lin :) my best to you in the contest! xomo
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/23/2017 10:01:00 AM
*giggle* I know eh!? I keep rereading his contest rules, a work of art in itself :) Love the challenge!
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/22/2017 1:52:00 PM
You may be able to hear my laughter...lol Mo. Thanks for thinking this one might meet Greg's qualifications.

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