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Wildfires In His Eyes

"You're here," he whispered from shadows

My fragrance consorted before me 
Heady scent of musk-infused blooms 
Intoxicating allure, lustfully impure

On the bed was an opened poetry book,
across it pages,  a perfect red rose
Dark crimson, like the blood within me flows
heated by need and the greed in his eyes
There burned the wildfires of desire
flames fanned as I moved nearer

They reflected soft glimmers 
of the pearlized moon 
She, a naughty voyeur, peering in the night
Through an open window she watched
the rhythm of swaying shadows at play

Seductive smile on my vermilion lips 
in a chamber painted amber by candlelight
No need of their scintillation to see
His touch was all I needed 
to guide me in flights of ecstacy
as hands pleaded in sensual strokes

Diamonds danced across a sapphire sky 
He breathed erotic sensations on my nape 
and slid a strap of the gown down my shoulder 
The pulse of his heart beat against my hand
my other caressed the ruff at his temple 

Fuchsia fluttered on the trellised window 
Their aroma faded as I inhaled his balm
We tasted love and savored passion 
Now sated and replete in a moment of calm

Soft breezes swirled across warm silk sheets
My hand trembled as I reached for him
Wildfires reignited in his emerald eyes
"The night is still young and the moon is asleep," 
I whispered. My intent was not disguised 


     ~    9/22/17    ~
       The Poet's Fire
 Hosted by: Greg Barden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Haight Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 3:53 PM
You have beautifully addressed the theme, Lin, with this well-written sensuous poem. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 7:34 AM
Back with congratulations :) hugs! xomo
Allison Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 5:58 AM
wow Lin I think we must have been away on holiday and I missed this sultry gem. many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Barden Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 11:44 PM
Just adored this write, Lin, and it was so sexy and libidinous ... it also left some things up to the imagination, and I think that's the sexiest element of ALL - letting the readers' minds do some of the work. Congratulations on FIFTH PLACE, and thank you for your patience! :-) <3
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 1:44 PM
I enjoyed this romantic poem. It is well written. have a nice day my friend.
Lane Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 2:23 PM
Thanks very much, Darlene.
Snyder Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Nice, very nice Lin Flights of ecstasy, nice.
Lane Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 2:23 PM
Fantasy...reality...in either case it would be wonderful. Thanks, Edward.
Lindley Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 7:13 AM
You my friend built a bonfire with this romantic and extremely sensual creation! What a great expression of love's intensity and romantic interludes. A fav...
Lane Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 2:22 PM
Thank you kindly, Robert.
Warrior Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 10:29 AM
Sizzling!!!...best wishes...^WW^
Lane Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 7:23 PM
Thank you ever so much, WW.
Sivey Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 12:38 PM
WOW! Now I'm all hot, where's my wife? You would do this to me Lin! Ugh! This is such a sensual write, so filled with poisonous pleasures at every whim! Such an ecstasy filled poem, I loved reading it this afternoon! What a fabulous piece, now I'm blushing, Great Work my friend!!
Lane Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 1:53 PM
Oh Stop or you're going to make me blush. haha Russell. Thanks for the 'hot' comments!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 10:26 AM
I need a cold shower now. Hot stuff! Sultry pen Lin :) my best to you in the contest! xomo
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 10:01 AM
*giggle* I know eh!? I keep rereading his contest rules, a work of art in itself :) Love the challenge!
Lane Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 1:52 PM
You may be able to hear my laughter...lol Mo. Thanks for thinking this one might meet Greg's qualifications.
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