Wilderness of the Mind

Disorientated in the world I've known.
Struggling to comprehend what's defined.
Unable to fix my course, I'm alone.
I stumble through my encamped darkness blind.
Encircled by confusion I must stand,
To confront the reasons that find me lost,
And reach for the will my soul shall demand,
To defeat this fluster, to pay its cost.
My depth of will begins to marbleize,
As I dissolve fear of failure away.
Before me a challenge I won't disguise .
The tensile strength of my will on display

Confused in the wilderness of the mind,
To temper the lost soul, to realign
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Turner Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 8:08 AM
Excellent write my friend, a well deserving poem to place in the Lost contest Congratulations!
La France Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 12:33 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my Lost contest, with this great Sonnet ~
Parker Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 3:14 PM
Thank you Broken Wings
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 7:10 PM
A great insight into the fear of failure Frederic. Congratulations on your placement. I give this a #7
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February 6, 2016 at 4:43 PM
Frederic, Congrats on your lovely "LOST" win. LINDA
Paras Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:19 PM
I admire the eloquence of your expressions--flowing, stimulating like this solid poem!
Onclaud Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 1:06 PM
a refreshing transformation with lovely metaphors, frederick.. you will never be lost!..huggs
Andresen Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 12:54 PM
- Lovely and touching written, Frederic - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Henderson Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:07 AM
I like it! Good luck in the contest! Peace and blessings my friend.
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