Wild Willow Tears

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Wild willow tears A poignant elegy to ecstasy weeping as if embraced by a light breeze Suspended in a sad splash of water Her eyes drooped regarded the aqua pond There are willows in her bay Her tears are trickling down You are unable to view them What calms her down? One day, the breeze will blow The west wind comes afterward from heaven's womb There is a wind gust wears a harp around her neck. A melodic song with tragic lyrics Joyousness is a tear-drying balm at the point of trembling happiness constantly fit and linked together. visually stunning river upon waking up from a nap spend some time in the shadows that break off individual strands and a soft, soothing touch. in a dazzlingly large number. Refreshing and toning the skin the furrows between its eyes But bound amid the forest quiet How painful those tears were! The tone is still cold and aloof as a toast to the ecstatic fits Moreover, all over its bosom No feelings are leaking through although stirring and twisting. The delights they find beneath Yield the willow a little melody the wandering weeping willow That's a sure way to deflate spirits Summer's conception dates.
Written: January 03, 2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 1/6/2023 7:16:00 AM
Creative work about the lovely weeping willow. I have always enjoyed the long, elegant limbs of the weeping willow. they definitely have their own unique melody when the wind arouses their limbs. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/4/2023 6:33:00 AM
Great imagery, Sotto, very deep poetry:)
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Date: 1/4/2023 6:12:00 AM
Wonderful capture of splendid images my friend. Best to you.
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Date: 1/4/2023 2:54:00 AM
A great poem but where is the tale?
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Date: 1/3/2023 9:09:00 PM
These are beautiful trees and it's great to create such a visual story around this little beauty.
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Date: 1/3/2023 7:20:00 PM
The weeping willows by the aqua pond shedding tears.... what a lively image. The gust of wind coming from Heaven's bosom drying up their tears ! So beautiful.... dear Lasaad
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Date: 1/3/2023 5:42:00 PM
Hi Lasaad…I absolutely love Weeping Willows the way they look ,their name …..just beautiful as is your poem about them. Beautifully described….you did them justice Lasaad with this delightful poem. Love it! Debx
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