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galloping waves cresting the shore wild white horses riding blue sea nature’s beauty that I adore tides ebbing and flowing to me Visual 3 Jan Allison 7th March 2015 Contest - Memento of Water – Nette Onclaud Syllables checked with how many syllables 8,6,2,8,6,2

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James Fraser

Date: 3/10/2015 4:09:00 PM

Lovely take on the image Jan, aren't horses majestic. I love the Palomino colours, and the white. Good luck in Nette's contest, hugs//James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2015 4:14:00 PM

Thanks James - if you want to see some stunning images of horses check out Lee Rudd photography - some amazing images:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/10/2015 9:16:00 AM

I love the poem and picture!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2015 11:39:00 AM

Thanks Richard I am always inspired by the lovely images the sponsors find for us:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2015 4:39:00 PM

you did a really great job with it, Jan. I especially love the first part of it. that first line is stunning.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2015 2:17:00 AM

Thanks Andrea I do value your comments:-) Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/9/2015 9:08:00 AM

Stunning beauty adorned with the ditto matching colorful words. Wonderfully done, my lovely friend. 7 i feel here. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison
Date: 3/9/2015 9:57:00 AM

Thanks so much BL:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/8/2015 10:32:00 PM

wow, so beautiful!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/9/2015 9:56:00 AM

Thanks Arthur:-) Hugs Jan xx

Donna Jones

Date: 3/8/2015 12:56:00 PM

Stunning....so well done

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2015 12:58:00 PM

Thank you so much Donna I hope Nette enjoys it:-) Hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/8/2015 12:43:00 PM

It is well written with cleaver imagery that whisper their presence off the page and into your heart. Emile #7

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2015 12:52:00 PM

Thanks Emile for your lovely comment and 7 rating:-) Hugs jan xx

Mama Bear

Date: 3/8/2015 11:58:00 AM

Ah my dear friend Among the darkness you still see light Well done Hugs Edith

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2015 12:06:00 PM

Thanks Mama bear:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/8/2015 8:37:00 AM

Well done Jan...you captured both the spirit of this visual theme and that of the form in which it is written. We have a winner! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2015 8:49:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Paul - I hope Nette likes it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/8/2015 4:18:00 AM

Excellent. Great imagery write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2015 6:06:00 AM

Thanks so much Ravi:-) Hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/8/2015 3:40:00 AM

Reminds me of when my brother and I used to go sailing- we knew we were in for a bumpy ride when we saw the white horses. Lovely write, Jan #7. Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2015 6:06:00 AM

I live on a small Island - I love watching the sea - much better than being on it especially when its rough and the white horses are galloping lol :-)Hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/8/2015 1:19:00 AM

Dynamic galloping beauty out of your pen flows, dear Jan! A seven!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2015 6:04:00 AM

Thanks so much Demetrios:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper

Date: 3/7/2015 7:00:00 PM

Great imagry in your verse to complement the picture. I often see the image of horses galloping when i watch the waves breaking. Really lovely verse. love Shane xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 7:02:00 PM

The white waves breaking are known as 'white horses' so the image on the picture is very apt:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 3/7/2015 5:46:00 PM

Goes perfect with the pic Jan....good luck Jan....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 5:51:00 PM

Thanks Tim would love to be able to post the picture my brother in law won a photo contest with that was called wild horses too:-) Hugs jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/7/2015 4:58:00 PM

wonderful imagery Jan gl in contest hugs 7

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 5:07:00 PM

Thanks Shadow:-) My brother in law does photography and won a prize for a photo he took called white horses:-) Hugs jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 3/7/2015 4:20:00 PM

Nicely done Jan, I've made a few attempts with this form to no avail. Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 4:23:00 PM

Thanks John it is quite a challenge - I am sure you will come up with something brilliant:-) This wasnt the original image I went with but i couldn't get that one to flow or rhyme:-( Hugs Jan xxx