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Wild White Horses

galloping waves cresting the shore
wild white horses riding
blue sea
nature’s beauty that I adore
tides ebbing and flowing
to me

Visual 3
Jan Allison
7th March 2015
Contest - Memento of Water – Nette Onclaud
Syllables checked with how many syllables 8,6,2,8,6,2

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James Fraser March 10, 2015 at 4:09 PM Lovely take on the image Jan, aren't horses majestic. I love the Palomino colours, and the white. Good luck in Nette's contest, hugs//James xx Jan Allison March 10, 2015 at 4:14 PM Thanks James - if you want to see some stunning images of horses check out Lee Rudd photography - some amazing images:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux March 10, 2015 at 9:16 AM I love the poem and picture! Jan Allison March 10, 2015 at 11:39 AM Thanks Richard I am always inspired by the lovely images the sponsors find for us:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 9, 2015 at 4:39 PM you did a really great job with it, Jan. I especially love the first part of it. that first line is stunning. Jan Allison March 10, 2015 at 2:17 AM Thanks Andrea I do value your comments:-) Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath March 9, 2015 at 9:08 AM Stunning beauty adorned with the ditto matching colorful words. Wonderfully done, my lovely friend. 7 i feel here. Loved always,bl Jan Allison March 9, 2015 at 9:57 AM Thanks so much BL:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Arthur Vaso March 8, 2015 at 10:32 PM wow, so beautiful!!!! Jan Allison March 9, 2015 at 9:56 AM Thanks Arthur:-) Hugs Jan xx

Donna Jones March 8, 2015 at 12:56 PM Stunning....so well done Jan Allison March 8, 2015 at 12:58 PM Thank you so much Donna I hope Nette enjoys it:-) Hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet March 8, 2015 at 12:43 PM It is well written with cleaver imagery that whisper their presence off the page and into your heart. Emile #7 Jan Allison March 8, 2015 at 12:52 PM Thanks Emile for your lovely comment and 7 rating:-) Hugs jan xx

Mama Bear March 8, 2015 at 11:58 AM Ah my dear friend Among the darkness you still see light Well done Hugs Edith Jan Allison March 8, 2015 at 12:06 PM Thanks Mama bear:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus March 8, 2015 at 8:37 AM Well done Jan...you captured both the spirit of this visual theme and that of the form in which it is written. We have a winner! Hugs // paul Jan Allison March 8, 2015 at 8:49 AM Thanks for the lovely comment Paul - I hope Nette likes it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ravi Sathasivam March 8, 2015 at 4:18 AM Excellent. Great imagery write. Enjoyed. Tfs Jan Allison March 8, 2015 at 6:06 AM Thanks so much Ravi:-) Hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley March 8, 2015 at 3:40 AM Reminds me of when my brother and I used to go sailing- we knew we were in for a bumpy ride when we saw the white horses. Lovely write, Jan #7. Viv x Jan Allison March 8, 2015 at 6:06 AM I live on a small Island - I love watching the sea - much better than being on it especially when its rough and the white horses are galloping lol :-)Hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis March 8, 2015 at 1:19 AM Dynamic galloping beauty out of your pen flows, dear Jan! A seven! Jan Allison March 8, 2015 at 6:04 AM Thanks so much Demetrios:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper March 7, 2015 at 7:00 PM Great imagry in your verse to complement the picture. I often see the image of horses galloping when i watch the waves breaking. Really lovely verse. love Shane xxx Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 7:02 PM The white waves breaking are known as 'white horses' so the image on the picture is very apt:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith March 7, 2015 at 5:46 PM Goes perfect with the pic Jan....good luck Jan....hugs Tim Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 5:51 PM Thanks Tim would love to be able to post the picture my brother in law won a photo contest with that was called wild horses too:-) Hugs jan xx

Shadow Hamilton March 7, 2015 at 4:58 PM wonderful imagery Jan gl in contest hugs 7 Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 5:07 PM Thanks Shadow:-) My brother in law does photography and won a prize for a photo he took called white horses:-) Hugs jan xx

John Lawless March 7, 2015 at 4:20 PM Nicely done Jan, I've made a few attempts with this form to no avail. Good luck in the contest. Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 4:23 PM Thanks John it is quite a challenge - I am sure you will come up with something brilliant:-) This wasnt the original image I went with but i couldn't get that one to flow or rhyme:-( Hugs Jan xxx