Wild Shoot

The beautiful running rose 
Your beauty is fully exposed
Full of buds and tiny blooms
All the birds are singing in tune

The waterfountain from above
Has fully restored you with love
Even the wild shoot has been tamed
The living water called your name

Tiny pale pink cascading blooms
Draw all birds and bees to zoom
Drawing on your nectar still
They have been gloriously filled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 7:49 PM
Awesome poem Sara. So vivid the blooms, running over with Love's river of life's love in action. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Amah Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 3:25 PM
Ever imagined how much of those sweet words of encouragement coming my way. Sara, you’re like those roses that put some fragrance upon the glades & fields of paradise. I admire this beautiful write! Keep fit! Canny.
Fraser Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 11:28 AM
Delightful read Sara, any poem with a Rose is all right by me >> James
Austin Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 7:43 AM
This brings to mind one late rose on our bush outside...more beautiful than all the rest because of its solitude. Love, daver
Gass Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 7:35 AM
Sara, this is filled with beautiful sentiment and lovely images! Such an inpiring, floeing piece! Love, Robin
Delacroix Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 9:32 PM
Very pretty picture of the rose. Beautiful word choices. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem too. Caroline.
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October 15, 2009 at 4:38 PM
beautiful write mom, thanks for the museum visit today! and starbucks it was nice an a dreary day!!
Owens Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 11:59 AM
I love those roses don't you? Love this piece too...check your soup mail....Marty
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