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Wild Reflection

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   The shake of her digits
            as the she
      with palm up high
            gazed at I
    knowing all the while
        mine reflection
             was wild

    The pane betwixt us
          thick as ice
            as the he
      over her shoulder
    intently with nervous
      did construed why

         His beam from 
        beginning to end
did declare pronouncement
           not with lips
          yet with eyes

             good-bye  :}

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/14/2013 9:14:00 PM
James , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .
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Date: 5/30/2012 7:24:00 AM
Yes, heat I find with my crossed eyes as I drink the nectar of thy words. Soup mails
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Date: 5/28/2012 1:03:00 PM
The eyes are the window to the soul so it is said and the message they contain can be read by those connected. Great one James! :)
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Date: 5/24/2012 3:20:00 PM
aww thats a lovley poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 5/24/2012 9:15:00 AM
Ah this is a sad ending as the lips shall not meet. Enjoyed your poem with my morning coffee. Have a great day. love phyl
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Date: 5/21/2012 1:30:00 PM
A sad, surprising end to a lovely poem.
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