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Wild Reflection

. The shake of her digits as the she with palm up high gazed at I knowing all the while mine reflection was wild The pane betwixt us thick as ice as the he over her shoulder intently with nervous did construed why His beam from beginning to end did declare pronouncement not with lips yet with eyes good-bye :}

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/14/2013 9:14:00 PM
James , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .
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Date: 5/30/2012 7:24:00 AM
Yes, heat I find with my crossed eyes as I drink the nectar of thy words. Soup mails
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Date: 5/28/2012 1:03:00 PM
The eyes are the window to the soul so it is said and the message they contain can be read by those connected. Great one James! :)
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Date: 5/24/2012 3:20:00 PM
aww thats a lovley poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 5/24/2012 9:15:00 AM
Ah this is a sad ending as the lips shall not meet. Enjoyed your poem with my morning coffee. Have a great day. love phyl
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Date: 5/21/2012 1:30:00 PM
A sad, surprising end to a lovely poem.
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