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Wild Pure and Free Love

I am just a country boy at heart
mustang free wild at spirit
Awakening to the bliss birds singing love piercing into a soul
Treasure gem in the promised land
dewdrops are falling rubbing them into my fingers 
wind breathing her voice whispers silver 
I hold so much love deep inside for you
stroking gently as it touches softly 
your one amazing woman to me
sweetly inside the land of milk and honey
touching finger caress in the morning sun 
Golden dreams in her I smile rising queen of the east
To she who bows me humble 
so full of grace inside treasure deeply smiling 
Then as I look across the mountains 
captured in deep thoughts within beauty wow
White clouds in the sky racing to dreamland
darling hop on the magic carpet 
whisked away in a breathless heartbeat
I fall away into a distant dream starstruck paradise Shangri-la
garden of eden your my seventh heaven love
never have I tasted such a fine fruit
paradise walking with you is to wonderland 
hand in hand we will dance together sweetheart
in never-never land forever and always our love
you darling are heaven on earth 
illusion of a rainbow falling rich 
baby I found my pot of gold
your all the riches this man needs in the heart 
Darling with you I can see a great vision
together in the great golden cased thoughts
us two at the pearly gates of heaven
now your my dream smiling angel of delight

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Juliet Minayo Date: 10/29/2014 3:32:00 AM Lovely poem Liam Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/29/2014 3:44:00 AM juliet thank you deeply for the very beautiful comment bless you

Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/6/2014 12:25:00 AM Excellent, Liam I am adding this poem to my favs. Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/6/2014 1:28:00 AM thank you maurice really for touching me so deeply wonderful comment truly from the heart appreciated pal

Robert Lindley Date: 10/5/2014 9:02:00 AM A great one my friend. Adding this one to my fav list. Always good to reread and study such poems . As other poets teach me so very much. Thanks... This site has in my estimation well over a hundred unique, talented and truly amazing poets . So many I haven't enough time to read and study all. Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/5/2014 9:51:00 AM thank you kindly robert for the amazing heartfelt beautiful comment must agree with you there is so much talent on site and it is very had to read them all bless you deeply appreciated

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/5/2014 7:21:00 AM Passionate work..I enjoyed reading your expressive and descriptive work this morn..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/5/2014 9:45:00 AM sara thank you kindly dear friend wonderful comment smiling deeply appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/5/2014 6:09:00 AM - This is very romantic Liam, a dream of the real great love - but remember that a drop of true love is worth more than a whole sack of gold coins - Love it, my friend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/5/2014 6:14:00 AM well that one drop is all it takes wonderful comment anne lise thank you so kingly bless you dear friend

Gary Bateman Date: 10/5/2014 5:02:00 AM Liam my very good friend . . . A most beautiful and highly meaningful write here!! In a word: "Brilliant." I can certainly see, sense and feel the emotion and passion you've put into this magnificent write. The one is a "Favorite Poem" for me and you're always one of my very favorite poets. No doubt about that. Your works are always captivating with the way your imagery flows and enchants the reader throughout your work. Cheers and My Best Wishes Liam!! Gary Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/5/2014 5:10:00 AM aah gary brought tears to my eyes pal oh i spent quite some time on this one really trying to make it special for someone in fact quite a few days just missing a piece of heaven i wrote this dear friend your comment really touched me thank you deeply pal

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/5/2014 4:55:00 AM Love for nature, love for a woman, love in your heart for both in a marvelous way: Images, expressions, descriptions. A marvel of writing in an impressive parade, my friend Liam, a seven a must!! Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/5/2014 5:01:00 AM thank you demetrios truly outstanding beautiful comment dear friend truly appreciated