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Wild pure and free love

I am just a country boy at heart mustang free wild at spirit Awakening to the bliss birds singing love piercing into a soul Treasure gem in the promised land dewdrops are falling rubbing them into my fingers wind breathing her voice whispers silver I hold so much love deep inside for you stroking gently as it touches softly your one amazing woman to me sweetly inside the land of milk and honey touching finger caress in the morning sun Golden dreams in her I smile rising queen of the east To she who bows me humble so full of grace inside treasure deeply smiling Then as I look across the mountains captured in deep thoughts within beauty wow White clouds in the sky racing to dreamland darling hop on the magic carpet whisked away in a breathless heartbeat I fall away into a distant dream starstruck paradise Shangri-la garden of eden your my seventh heaven love never have I tasted such a fine fruit paradise walking with you is to wonderland hand in hand we will dance together sweetheart in never-never land forever and always our love you darling are heaven on earth illusion of a rainbow falling rich baby I found my pot of gold your all the riches this man needs in the heart Darling with you I can see a great vision together in the great golden cased thoughts us two at the pearly gates of heaven now your my dream smiling angel of delight

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Date: 10/29/2014 3:32:00 AM
Lovely poem Liam
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liam mcdaid
Date: 10/29/2014 3:44:00 AM
juliet thank you deeply for the very beautiful comment bless you
Date: 10/6/2014 12:25:00 AM
Excellent, Liam I am adding this poem to my favs.
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Date: 10/6/2014 1:28:00 AM
thank you maurice really for touching me so deeply wonderful comment truly from the heart appreciated pal
Date: 10/5/2014 9:02:00 AM
A great one my friend. Adding this one to my fav list. Always good to reread and study such poems . As other poets teach me so very much. Thanks... This site has in my estimation well over a hundred unique, talented and truly amazing poets . So many I haven't enough time to read and study all.
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Date: 10/5/2014 9:51:00 AM
thank you kindly robert for the amazing heartfelt beautiful comment must agree with you there is so much talent on site and it is very had to read them all bless you deeply appreciated
Date: 10/5/2014 7:21:00 AM
Passionate work..I enjoyed reading your expressive and descriptive work this morn..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/5/2014 9:45:00 AM
sara thank you kindly dear friend wonderful comment smiling deeply appreciated
Date: 10/5/2014 6:09:00 AM
- This is very romantic Liam, a dream of the real great love - but remember that a drop of true love is worth more than a whole sack of gold coins - Love it, my friend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/5/2014 6:14:00 AM
well that one drop is all it takes wonderful comment anne lise thank you so kingly bless you dear friend
Date: 10/5/2014 5:02:00 AM
Liam my very good friend . . . A most beautiful and highly meaningful write here!! In a word: "Brilliant." I can certainly see, sense and feel the emotion and passion you've put into this magnificent write. The one is a "Favorite Poem" for me and you're always one of my very favorite poets. No doubt about that. Your works are always captivating with the way your imagery flows and enchants the reader throughout your work. Cheers and My Best Wishes Liam!! Gary
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liam mcdaid
Date: 10/5/2014 5:10:00 AM
aah gary brought tears to my eyes pal oh i spent quite some time on this one really trying to make it special for someone in fact quite a few days just missing a piece of heaven i wrote this dear friend your comment really touched me thank you deeply pal
Date: 10/5/2014 4:55:00 AM
Love for nature, love for a woman, love in your heart for both in a marvelous way: Images, expressions, descriptions. A marvel of writing in an impressive parade, my friend Liam, a seven a must!!
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Date: 10/5/2014 5:01:00 AM
thank you demetrios truly outstanding beautiful comment dear friend truly appreciated