Wild Onion

wild onion savory, as she breaks up 
lumps in the brown, cold, soil
tall and fleshy with bladed leaves 
spiked up toward the sky and flowers 
of pink or white or yellow. Her delicacy
is raw and you don’t have to care for 
her since her harsh voice is roasted at
the core, but she invades your heart as 
she spoils. Dishonored, you await her 
death and rake through the foliage. Now
upended she passes through a sieve and
ends up in a trash can weighed in a barrel.
There is nothing to do but let her live 
in the wild where she was meant.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 8, 2015 at 2:05 PM
Julie, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the home page. **SKAT**
Kendrick Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 5:09 PM
I especially like the last two lines..Good one.I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
Mehta Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 6:54 AM
Very wonderful metaphor you have composed of the onion, julie
Horsman Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 9:19 PM
I enjoyed reading this Julie, she is some humdinger of a onion. Harry
Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 6:42 PM
wow, what an interesting poem. I thought it was the actual onion you were writing of and then it changed and seemed like a person too. I enjoyed reading this one.
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