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01/11/25

Rhyming scheme :  abcdefghij  jihgfedcba

A Jan,2025 Posted

Fifth Place

Contest by Brian Strand

WILD NIGHT

                                             Night
                                           is wild.
                                   Dear sweetheart !
                                     Passion oozing
                                 Bubbling blood in flood.
                                 Come close closer closest.
                             Embrace tight ! Feel my heart throb.
                                 Agrestal yet natural urge
                            surging, drifting, gushing in efflux.
                          Honour my ardent ardour, let's be wild.

                       Strong feelings in fervent fervour, not mild.
                      Wild Full Moon might : I am just Moonstruck.
                           I'm confident, you will indulge.
                            Dear ! My amour, you have robbed.
                                 Your love is my asset.
                                   Now vision  blurred       
                                        Senses losing ...
                                         Restless lust
                                             to yield.
                                              Right !
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Ibeh Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 3:35 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your podium win in my contest with this wonderfully crafted Etheree poem, Anisha. I thoroughly enjoyed it
Ashley Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 8:24 AM
Dear Anisha, your poem's imagery captures the intensity of a wild passion felt for one's "sweetheart". Your last line is awesome, and indeed, passionate! Good luck in Edward's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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