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Suzette's 'A Personal Valentine Contest ~ 2/5/25

Wild Gypsy Dancer

For her own sensual pleasure, she loved to dance
Never giving in again, to her need for romance
for once, long ago, a man had broken her heart
To this wild gypsy woman, the dance was an art
Her torrid gyrations were evidence of her passion
Sensual, her heart to passion


*Phoenix sixain form

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Daniel Henry Rodgers February 5, 2025 at 10:31 AM Dear Lin, Ahh such fiery independence, a soul reborn in rhythm and movement. I see that there’s such strength in her defiance, yet an undeniable passion that refuses to be dimmed. A beautifully created and powerful expression of resilience! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Lin Lane February 8, 2025 at 9:39 AM Hello, friend Daniel. There's much that I admired in my Gypsy dancer in addition to those you mentioned. Independence being a great trait. Thanks a bunch.

CayCay Godwin February 5, 2025 at 9:58 AM I could NOT even wrap my mind around the directions for this contest. I admire that you pulled off such an admirable and enjoyable poem BUT I can't comment on its contest fit - again, clueless. Hugs ... CayCay Lin Lane February 5, 2025 at 10:12 AM Hi CayCay. What your comment revealed to me was that you liked my lines enough to do so. That’s good enough for me. ;-)