Wild Gypsy Dancer

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Suzette's 'A Personal Valentine Contest ~ 2/5/25

For her own sensual pleasure, she loved to dance Never giving in again, to her need for romance for once, long ago, a man had broken her heart To this wild gypsy woman, the dance was an art Her torrid gyrations were evidence of her passion Sensual, her heart to passion *Phoenix sixain form

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/5/2025 10:31:00 AM

Dear Lin, Ahh such fiery independence, a soul reborn in rhythm and movement. I see that there’s such strength in her defiance, yet an undeniable passion that refuses to be dimmed. A beautifully created and powerful expression of resilience! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Lin Lane
Date: 2/8/2025 9:39:00 AM

Hello, friend Daniel. There's much that I admired in my Gypsy dancer in addition to those you mentioned. Independence being a great trait. Thanks a bunch.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/5/2025 9:58:00 AM

I could NOT even wrap my mind around the directions for this contest. I admire that you pulled off such an admirable and enjoyable poem BUT I can't comment on its contest fit - again, clueless. Hugs ... CayCay

Lin Lane
Date: 2/5/2025 10:12:00 AM

Hi CayCay. What your comment revealed to me was that you liked my lines enough to do so. That’s good enough for me. ;-)