Wild Concert

You paint a picture with matching emotions in the fine Senryu, Valsa. Write On! my friend. Bill

We don't know what the outcome of this war cast upon such a country by such a large country will come to. I can feel the emotion in this work. Reads like a good contender in the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Ah, but with your strong foundation, you hear -- but you are not moved! Strength and Faith, Gershon

- we all fear this symphony, Valsa - Excellent written ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

I can feel and relate to those poor Ukrainians that are going through this... Well written my Dear as always...

Mothers are Russian to applaud this! Aloha!

The horrible sound of war is transformed into a melodious Senryu, dearest Valsa! Be blessed!

Nice senryu, a piece of nature and heart of the soul. Many Blessings

Great Senryu, Valsa. I enjoy how the phrase "I hear" is combined with the "thundering war symphony." Wonderful metaphors. Good luck in the contest.

I like the emotions you convey in the ending line, Valsa. Best to you.

Superbly penned, Valsa! Good luck for the contest

Great metaphoric use even though sad.