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i hear from so near war’s thundering symphony~ heart chords strum in fear
October.6.2022 Simply Senryu Poetry Contest Sponsor- John Lawless

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Date: 10/19/2022 7:51:00 AM
You paint a picture with matching emotions in the fine Senryu, Valsa. Write On! my friend. Bill
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Date: 10/10/2022 7:01:00 AM
We don't know what the outcome of this war cast upon such a country by such a large country will come to. I can feel the emotion in this work. Reads like a good contender in the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/7/2022 2:51:00 PM
Ah, but with your strong foundation, you hear -- but you are not moved! Strength and Faith, Gershon
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Date: 10/6/2022 1:05:00 PM
- we all fear this symphony, Valsa - Excellent written ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 10/6/2022 11:55:00 AM
I can feel and relate to those poor Ukrainians that are going through this... Well written my Dear as always...
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Date: 10/6/2022 11:19:00 AM
Mothers are Russian to applaud this! Aloha!
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Date: 10/6/2022 10:51:00 AM
The horrible sound of war is transformed into a melodious Senryu, dearest Valsa! Be blessed!
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Date: 10/6/2022 8:50:00 AM
Nice senryu, a piece of nature and heart of the soul. Many Blessings
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Date: 10/6/2022 7:07:00 AM
Great Senryu, Valsa. I enjoy how the phrase "I hear" is combined with the "thundering war symphony." Wonderful metaphors. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/6/2022 6:57:00 AM
I like the emotions you convey in the ending line, Valsa. Best to you.
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Date: 10/6/2022 12:09:00 AM
Superbly penned, Valsa! Good luck for the contest
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Date: 10/5/2022 10:19:00 PM
Great metaphoric use even though sad.
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